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My Family's Boyfriend

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rml_mel #1
Chapter 11: DID SOMEONE SEE SHUTA UND YUNA KISSING, TOOK A PHOTO AND PUBLISHED IT WITH THE HEADLINE "Yuna! 1 Girl 2 boys"?!!!
OR IS IT ABOUT THE MAN?!!!
OMG NOOOOOOO
EDDYYYYY xD :'(
sunset-coffee-cup
#2
I'm not really a fan of JJCC, moreover I watch Eddy and Prince only in Pops in Seoul but DANG! this is so cute! it's well written and I like it! ^^
problematicjane #3
I actually think that when I first saw this story, it is entitled as "My Family's Boyfriend" which means the boy's family always get his attention leaving the girl no time with his boyfriend.

But them after reading the comment below by zan8901, I realized that it was the girl's family who are the ones who always get his attention leaving the girl no time with his boyfriend.

Thanks by the way hahaha^^ I'm so stupid to only realize that after reading her comment
zan8901
#4
Chapter 4: Okay, first I will say I did think the relationship between Eddy and Yuna's parents and Yuna and Eddy's was a little rushed. Literally weeks earlier Yuna had been getting a*s kicked and Eddy was comforting, and now they're just acting like two awkward teens. Not to mention, Eddy seems to only go to Yuna's house to hang out with her dad.

Next, I think Yuna is exaggerating a bit and being a little too dramatic. She should be a happy her parents and Eddy are in a good relationship, but at the same time I do see what she's getting at. Eddy is spending more time with her parents then with her, and that is very frustrating. (I would also be extremely pissed off if my date invited by mother to join us, when it's supposed to be just 'us'.) I'm ranting at this point, but I'm hoping they'll be able to work out this dilemma.

Jesus Christ, now I just realized why this story is called, "My Family's Boyfriend." XD I read over the description just now and face palmed. Why do you have to do this to me Eddy, why?
zan8901
#5
Chapter 3: Christ. Yuna is getting so much crap :/ I really do hope she'll stand up for herself in later chapters. She needs to show those girls that she's not a pushover.

And once again, Eddy is being over the to adorable and I just cannot handle it :)
zan8901
#6
Chapter 2: I'm hoping Yuna will throw her slippers at one of those girls faces when she gets them back. On a lighter note, Eddy is adorable :)
zan8901
#7
Chapter 1: Koharu needs to attack those stupid girls with her scissors :/