♥Miracle Paradise Review Shop ♥ ON HIATUS UNTIL DECEMBER 7 ! Hiring Staff..

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[CONTENTID1]Miracle Paradise Review Shop[/CONTENTID1]

 

[CONTENTID2]You want an honest review ? You want to know what to work on and what you are already doing great? You are at the right place. 

 

Here at Miracle Paradise Review Shop , we can grant your wishes. We are reliable people who like to give advice and help people to improve their writing skills. Far from the regular shops , our job isn't to bring you down , neither to give free compliment. Our job is to be honest in a constructive way. No brutal comments , no rude advices , only advices that are meant to help you become one of best authors of the site. 

 

What will be evaluated will be : 

- Language ( * /15)

- Plot ( * / 20)

- Realism ( * / 15 ) 

- Writing Style : ( * / 20)

- Flow : ( */ 15 )

- Catchiness ( */ 15 ) 

 

Pease take note that the realism will be judged even in fantastic or sci-fi stories. We will only adjust our methods of evaluations according to the type of story we review. 

 

To apply you must follow those five simple rules. There is not much rules here but you must follow them closely if you want your request to be accepted. 

 

Rules :

 

1- You must subcribe. We will put this " Story" available to subcribers only. You must also stay subscribed afterward. 

2- Upvotes are not essential to see your request accepted but it will be really appreciated if you do so when your review is finally out. No obligations , again, only do so if you think we deserve it. 

3- The service is free but we can accept donations from people if you feel like it. You are the judge to see if we deserve some or not. 

4- No bashing or rushing. We all have lives outside from the site so no needs to rush us. We will work as soon as we can in the time we have. 

5-For the moment we won't accept /yuri stories that has content in them. Our staff don't feel comfortable reading such stories but we are already looking for staff being able to fulfill those requests. Although , for now , we will remain close for them. 

6- Finally , but not lastly, you must credit the shop by a link sending your readers to this shop. We give you a delay of 5 days to do so. If , ever , you haven't been able to be online for a while or you simply can't for now ,please inbox us so we might delay the time limit for you. If ever you have no valid reasons and your refuse to credit the shop , you will be automaticaly put on the blacklist. If needed ,we will contact other review and advertise shops to warn them as well. You are warned , we will check. [/CONTENTID2].

 

 

 [CONTENTID3]The Reviewers available :

-MissShadow ( Emily ) 

- Laulau95 ( Laurence)

- Ppasuni

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[CONTENTID4] Let give us some love and share this shop with your friends ! [/CONTENTID4]

 

 

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Here is the way to apply : 

Please send us the following form answered by personal message. Add us as friend and send it to us :

 

 Author :

 Story Title :

 Story Link :

 Description :

 Personal Note : ( What you want us to focus on that wasn't indicated the said section previously. You can also send us a personal note about practically any other subject that might be important to the review ) 

 

After you send it to us , you must comment down below. We will reply to your comment if it's accepted. We will reply by inbox only if we have some questions about your form. 

Finally , comment after you picked up your review ! We still want to know your opinion on it to , ourselves , get better. 

 

°For those who would like to apply as a reviewer , please contact MissShadow personally. As reviewers , we will all be treated equally but MissShadow shall asign the stories to review. ° 

 

  Thanks for visiting the shop and we hope to have new from you soon. :) 

 

If we reviewed your story , please use a link to refer to our shop and use that banner! 

 

 

 

A special thank you to Spotlight Graphic for all their amazing work ! 

 

 

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rainingcho #1
Chapter 1: hey there do you hire? If you do, please tell me how to apply. Thanks a lot and all the best to your shop!
Emilieee
#2
Requested ^^
GreenGardenPop
#4
Requested...
baekthoven
#5
Chapter 3: Thank you for reviewing my story and giving some really good constructive feedback! I definitely now have a much clearer idea in my head of what aspects of my writing require improvement. And you're right about extending the length of the story, I was actually pondering about whether to make it a chaptered one or not (I might attempt it one day haha wish me luck ^_~), but I decided to leave it as it is for now, so that the real quality ideas of how to depict a genuinely serious illness come flowing in one day~ It was actually a homework assignment for English, a piece of 'Flash Fiction' where the writing leaves readers guessing, but I wanted people to understand it so they won't think I'm loopy haha! Thank you so much chingu, you really helped me through this quality review! ^_^ I have credited the shop and may many other writers stumble across it in the future! :)
baekthoven
#6
I have requested~! Thank you for you service ^_^
OlleriGolleri
#7
Hello I have requested, sent a message to Emily. Kindly accept it~~ thank you in advance!