Reviewer's Profile : Ppasuni.

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                                   Ppasuni

 

Name: Ppasuni .

Gender : Female .

Speaks: Mandarin , English and Korean.

Can read : Fluff, RomCom, Straight s and actions , Stories representing societal problems and Historical.

Can't read: Extreme Angst and /Yuri .

Favorite groups to review about : Any group that started under SM, YG or Cube Entertainment . Also ,B.A.P. , Got7, Mamamoo, BTS & KHipHop.

Ultimate Biases : Too much. Mostly rappers from the groups mentionned earlier.

Number of reviews: 2 at a time.

Special Message : Hello! I am new in reviewing but I have some experience writing and being reviewed. Language is not my forte, but I can offer you honest opinions on your story. I can be strict when it comes to paragraphing, usage of Korean words and song references in writing. Please do not hesitate to ask for my suggestions and please give me feedbacks for my reviews. I will try my best x 

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rainingcho #1
Chapter 1: hey there do you hire? If you do, please tell me how to apply. Thanks a lot and all the best to your shop!
Emilieee #2
Requested ^^
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GreenGardenPop #4
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baekthoven #5
Chapter 3: Thank you for reviewing my story and giving some really good constructive feedback! I definitely now have a much clearer idea in my head of what aspects of my writing require improvement. And you're right about extending the length of the story, I was actually pondering about whether to make it a chaptered one or not (I might attempt it one day haha wish me luck ^_~), but I decided to leave it as it is for now, so that the real quality ideas of how to depict a genuinely serious illness come flowing in one day~ It was actually a homework assignment for English, a piece of 'Flash Fiction' where the writing leaves readers guessing, but I wanted people to understand it so they won't think I'm loopy haha! Thank you so much chingu, you really helped me through this quality review! ^_^ I have credited the shop and may many other writers stumble across it in the future! :)
baekthoven #6
I have requested~! Thank you for you service ^_^
OlleriGolleri #7
Hello I have requested, sent a message to Emily. Kindly accept it~~ thank you in advance!
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