What a Beautiful Mess This Is

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Do Kyungsoo hires a cleaning service for his mess of an apartment. He expects a middle-aged cleaning lady, he gets Kim Jongin instead.





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He can smell Jongin's cologne, musky and heady, and Kyungsoo fights the urge to lay his head on his chest to take in more of it. And though he's done, his thumb shamelessly lingers on the curve of his cheek, tracing the smoothness of it. His eyes follow the angle of his jaw, the shape of his chin, to the captivating redness of his lips and God help him because all he wants to do is to lean in and have a taste. He looks up to see Jongin staring, eyes burning into his.


Kyungsoo swallows the sudden lump in his throat because he realizes he should pull back, move away, he's already crossed the many lines he'd drawn around to protect himself. The familiar twist in his chest is what snaps him back to his senses and  he hastily removes his hand but neither of them step back.



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Hi !  

First time posting, first exo fic, first chaptered fic (a lot of firsts for this one) and i haven't written in years so please be kind to me. *twiddles fingers nervously*

PG rating for now, possible rated chapters near the end.

Constructive comments are highly appreciated so I can improve.  :)

Btw, this was written like a sitcom, hence the scene transitions all throughout the fic.



EDIT: (07/31/2017)

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J-Tina101 #1
Chapter 17: Omg the pickup lines are soooo good. I kept thinking if a guy used one of them on me, it would work. Lol but of course none would ever out due Chanyeol. Love this. Thank you.
Burnsie75 #2
Chapter 16: Can’t wait to see how long this takes. It’s definitely not a one night stand.
Lazy_ass #3
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD I LIVE BAEKHYUN!! He's so shameless! I was so ready for that side Chanbeak 8D
I should be sleeping, it's almost 3:30 am and I have school tomorrow but this story is just so interesting ;A;
Chapter 25: i cry my eyes out thanx for the lovely story and great ending
Hiii....new to here and WISH YOU A FANTASTIC BRAND NEW 2018!! I must tell you, I was a crying,smiling mess by the end of the story. Also this was one mesmerized fic of my kaisoo list! Again wonderful.
Chapter 26: i feel like i’m floating on clouds while having a laptop perched on my lap reading this huge mass of love and fluffiness i love this so much it’s so refreshing to read, never been done before and i absolutely absolutely love it thank you so much! c,:
Chapter 13: OMG!!!!! At the first kiss I literally went "Awwwwwwwwwww" out loud and my boss threw me a look like "You're being paid to WORK and I'm sure the excel sheets didn't make you do that"
Chapter 10: Omg Jongins mom rocks XDDDD