ok, this story is from a game, Suikoden Tierkreis for the DS, and i generally looooooove it. anyone whose played the game knows that its a bit long and intense. Well, i, to improve my writing skills, plan on writing out the game, since its soooooo AWESOOOOME!!!!!!  

The girl staggered to the floor, in pain. She looked up and glared at her attackers, who began to back away, placing an object onto a box. They hadnt taken it from her, but stuck it in her arm. She gripped it as it started to throb painfuly.