So, you know how I entered myself for a rare couple writing contest on aff? 

Well, for the past two weeks, I have been having problems with the pace of the first chapter because srsly, I don't want my readers to be like, " WHOA! This story is going waaay~ too fast for my liking!"

Anyway, so to deal with my problem, I decided to print out the first chapter and have my best friend read it.

You see... the thing is, this was my first time having my best friend read my fanfic. Like she listens to kpop and stuff but... she doesn't want to get into fanfics bc she KNOWS what some of us would write about 0U0;;; But anyway, I asked her first if she was willing to read a sample of the first chapter and warned that it has Mpreg in it and she was like "Okay, sure... even though Mpreg is completely impossible..." (and obviously I had to make the point that's why fanfiction has the word "fiction" in it and yah-dah, yah-dah).
 

And anywho, she started to read it when we finally got a seat to settle down in, at Tim Horton's (a cafe) but here's the thing: SHE COMPLETELY DOESN'T GET PASSED THE FIRST SENTENCE THAT MENTIONS ABOUT MINSEOK HAVING THE BABY ABORTED!!!! CAN YOU BELIEVE IT?!?? THE FIRST SENTENCE!!!!

Her reason to this is because she just CAN'T picture a guy with a baby bump and so, I told her not to picture it then - as simple as that! But then, she still says she can't continue reading it and I'm like, "DUDE, I didn't even write Minseok's y time with the child's father... You have to at least be happy that I'm not making you read a y time scene."

So, since it was totally obvious that she didn't want to continue reading, i decided that I'll just bring it tomorrow to my music class and have my other friend read it. *CACKLES EVILLY*

And that's my story for the day, so far ^^

I'm in co-op rn so I gots to go~ BYE XPPP