So i realized this after i got a review

After I got a review and also a beta for my fic, they both are telling me all these improvements that i need that i didnt see before, and they are right. I have lots of dialog when i could have more description, and i do capitalize too much lol and too many exclamation points but i have a reason for that haha (because i talk like that in real life lol NO JOKE if u ask any of my friends that would be exactly how i talk, just me haha thats my personality some say fangirl others say crazy and others are just like ' thats just (insert name here)' lol) also i rush too much ( because i wanted to just update every once in a while even if it probably had no relevance to the story. In a back talkers secret for example, IT IS GOING THROUGH REVISION ATM, but i have not taken it down yet, but to warn you all, it will happen soon, but will be immediately posted up every day or every other day, ( if u hv questions, comment below) also, i will add chapters together because they are too short and need to be put together into one chapter so it doesnt seem like the story is just random throughout, in the beginning it was all just fun and games but now its getting more serious in the story, but new readers dont really know that because the beginning is like a whole different thing lol so that is being fixed, my beta is really awesome! And is teaching me alot and im really happy to have her as a beta. So this is just a heads up for you guys so that you know what is coming, and when the chapters get posted up, the new chaptwr will be posted at the end^^ So look foreward tothat;)

 

*spoiler*

 

It will tell more about siwon and who he really is~

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aenkr28 #1
I'll wait for you, but don't be too long please. ^^
UknowMi
#2
wow all the best and can't wait ^-^
dbsk5Lover #3
Wahh..! Im excited..(>_<)~