Author's Commentary [stolen from PictureMeBroken]

saw this post and thought it would be interesting. c;

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written, and stick that selection in the comments. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what’s going on in the character’s heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

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idiosyncrxtic
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"I'm tired, Lu."

"You can't possibly be as tired as I am. You can go ages without sleep. I can barely survive a day."

"No, not that kind of tired. It's not the kind of tired you can fix by simply sleeping."
"What on Earth are you talking about?"

Yixing sighs and rakes a hand through auburn locks. "I'm beginning to become tired of this life that we live. I want to... I think it's almost my time."

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Jess, it's time. It's time to commentate on this brilliant section from Neverland's Will