Review for SeasonsOfExo. I Want To Know You

Title: The title is fitting for the story, but it's not too original. It doesn't automatically draw in the audience. It's a little too obvious to the storyline, maybe try using a title that is more hinting to the story instead of being so direct.

Foreword/Description: It's really well written. It made me want to go and read the rest so I could see what drama happened. The only thing was your foreword was really long. Maybe consider cutting it down to two to three quotes? Up to you. There were also a couple of spelling and grammar errors and changing of point of view kinda made it confusing. But overall still good.

Plot: Overall, really good. It developed well and didn't move too fast or too slow and I really enjoyed the unfolding of events. There were some really awkward moments that didn't fit right like the whole thing where Luhan asked for Chen's book and suddenly decided to translate one thing for him. You could've written that differently maybe, but it still worked. It was a bit of a cliche idea, but you worked it and made it your own. Really good

Characters: No complaints here. Really enjoyed it. I loved your description of them, their development, how you expressed their inner feelings. Everything. I'm not used to seeing such a sad Chen though, but I still really loved it.

Style: Your writing is very good although occasionally there are some awkward wordings. You may want to watch out for point of view and maybe get a beta reader to fix things before you post your stories. But other than that. No complaints. Love your writing!

Sorry I don't do points. I feel like that's a bit cruel. But I will say this about your story. It's really good. Maybe a little more editing for the small things and it would be perfect. Keep up the good work and keep improving! I hope you do good in the contest!

Also latest update to the story: Two Poles Of A Magnet. Going to go read this now.