My attempt at 'happy' poetry
SO it was really hot today and then it rainedd and i also had tea. SO yeah thast whow i got this idea. I have no idea if this makes sense to you but it did i my head cuz well...honestly this is personally how I felt when i was supposedly in 'love'. I dont know if this is true...but from what i have experience its pretty damn close.
Love
It’s a lot like drinking hot tea on a cold day.
It makes you feel warm inside despite the biting cold.
It’s like the warm burn in your throat as the liquid travels down.
Love
It’s a lot like rain on a scorching day.
It makes you feel like rainbows despite the heat waves.
It’s like the smell of summer rain.
Love
It’s also a lot like drinking hot tea on a hot day.
It makes you feel like you are on fire inside and out, calming despite the agitation.
It’s like accidently spilling hot tea on your body (soul).
Love
It’s also a lot like rain on a frigid day.
It makes you feel like your heart froze along with the droplets on your window despite the heater on high.
It’s like the icy breeze after the rain.
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Hot and cold
yes dont judge me. I am still learning to write poetry to be honest. Writing happy poetry s so much harder than the angry/sad ones. Anyway constructive criticism would be appreciated :D
P.S - Should i just make a story sort of thing, but i will post my poetry updates when i write them? Would anyone be inetersted or iis making blogs fine? Any suggestions?
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