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Hello friends! Please help?

I have a problem.

I want to write a as detailed as possible.

can anyone please give an advice on how to write a detailed ?

well coz i think that whenever I write , it seems to be "detached".

please?

anyone?

any advice on how to write a detailed ?

it would really help me a lot! <3

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DBSKTaki
#1
lol, well, i don't know if this will be inappropriate and this is definitely random, but wouldn't you get ideas from watching ?? XDDD I mean, it would out of research, like i watched this one show that was like "behind the scenes" of the business episode on DramaFever that the undercover staff did and before hand, the staff had to do research on it before making that episode, and I was actually surprised at it. So, wouldn't be seen as research material for you, so that way you could somehow visualize the characters doing and you can change the details as you remember??

personally for me, i have very erted friends that talked about this sort of thing constantly, so it was just an idea.
VisualVolume
#2
research all the way! whether its , yuri, hetero or whatever, you can never go wrong with research. try being extremely descriptive, thats's what i do, and maybe put emphasis on certain points if you feel that help make it feel realistic. for me, i just try to make it as realistic as i possibly can. um, you can also try explaining how the character feels during, are they in pain, are they in pleasure or uncomfortable? that's all the advice i can give i suppose, good luck. :D
Kai-Lover
#3
Detailed ? Well um, look up synonyms for words that u want to be really descriptive.
ForgottenMemories013
#4
What kind of are we talking about?