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 Application Review

The Rules

follow them, please

 

1) Subscribe; I will not review your application unless you are subscribed to my application guide.

2) Don't complain if you don't get a completely awesome review. I am going to be honest so that you can improve your application.

3) Just because I am reviewing your application, and helping you improve; does not mean that you will be picked. I am not the author so I have no authority over whether you get picked or not.

4) All blogs must be made public. I will not be adding any friends to view their blogs. You can put your blog on 'friends only' after I have reviewed your application.

5) I can be a little harsh (though I will try not to be), so if you get a negative comment on your review, don't take it as I'm bashing you. I'm just not good at being gentle XD.

6) I will also review old applications for stories that have already picked their characters or the deadline has passed.

7) PM me the form or post it as a comment in this blog post.

8) I will only review completed applications.

 

 

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 Application Review

The form

fill in everything

 

Story Link: [Link to the story that you are applying for]

Deadline: [The deadline for the story you are applying for.If it has not been annouced / decided put TBA. If it has passed or you are sending me an old application, then just put N/A]

Application: [The link to the blog post your application is in]

Review: [Blog, PM, Chapter; do you want me to put my review in the comment of your blog post, PM it to you, or do you want me to make a new chapter in my application guide?]

Other: [Anythying you would like to tell me before I start reviewing or any thing specific you would like me to comment on as well as what I will be reviewing?]

 

 

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-mayvees
#1
story link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/816814/

deadline:
not as far as i know

application:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/938645

review type:
i'm cool with anything actually
whatever floats your boat

others:
okay, i recently rewrote this character
and since she still feels a little funny
i want to try and improve on my character
that being said, be as harsh as you want
would definitely be better if you could be
very very detailed with the review
silver-linings
#2
Can i still ask for a review?

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/573582

Deadline: TBA

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/830042

Review: PM

Other: Nothing in particular, just that her personality might be a bit inconsistent...
-exciting
#3
Story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/574275/cerulean-new-boygroup-apply-open-apply--boyband-boygroup-applyfic

Deadline: TBA

Application;https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/611524

Review; chapter

Other: i just wanna know another person's point of view besides the author
rolling-thunder #4
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/682723

Deadline: 29/3/14 GMT +8:00

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/810488

Review: You're free to post it up! ^^

Other: Nothing much really. Just that the deadline of the story doesn't matter to me because I just want a second opinion from someone else. Also, if possible, do give me some tips on how to improve! ^^
-ixora
#5
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/687145/garden-of-eden-apply-girlgroup-applyfic-loenent

Deadline: TBA

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/814621

Review: That's up to you

Other: I don't really know if her personality and attitude are fitting for a girl group member. When I created her I was aiming to make her unique but now I'm not really sure if she's that applyfic-friendly. I don't think that she's my best OC but most of my characters are rather mature and sarcastic and I wanted to create a rather funny, outgoing character, too. But right now I don't really know if she's a good character or not so I would appreciate your honest opinion.
HelloKitty10755
#6
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/601511/primadonna-sm-ent-s-new-girl-group-open-read-chapter-3-apply-girlgroup-sment
Deadlline: I think it was the 18th, I'm not sure.
Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/743203 (I did twins, this is the younger one)
Review: It's up to you
Other: Maybe just focusing on the more on the personality and the background. I tried a little harder on this one. The author said that she liked my character, but I think somethings may have been too rushed. I did plan out this character first before using it. But, I just want to see your opinion. Thanks!
kintoun
#7
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/639081

Deadline: tba

Application: https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/785051

Review: i'll leave it up to you since i dont mind either ; u ;

Other: i'm not sure if i'm allowed to request or if you are currently not accepting any but i dont see any signs back at the story thread so here i go ;;; i tend to ramble a lot in apps and since im a er for cute personalities im afraid it gets cliched, boring or worse, deemed a marysue? i hope you can give me lots of advices. thanks senpai! /boooooows \0/
OnyxsJoo
#8
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/582227/c-a-t-c-h-me-if-you-can-apply-closed-choosing-characters-and-writing-reviews-apply-gang-you-exo-bap-applyfic-bts

Deadline: n/a

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/716489

Review: it's up to you ^-^

Others: i really into applyfic since i start here, have bunch applications and i always have feeling there is something wrong but can't point it out rightly. this app is already get review from author and i try to fix it, but still don't have another feedback. so i need people review and comment about the thing i fixed... thanks
busans #9
Story link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/518560/pepperm-nt-girlgroup-o-p-e-n-apply-girlgroup-jyp-sment-plsapplyibegofyou

Deadline: n/a

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/723294

Review: it's up to you \o/

Others: i only got into apply fanficslike a few weeks ago? i've only applied for two so far, and this is my first. i hope you can help me point out the flaws and all so i can improve on it. thank you!0
Theangelvampire
#10
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/555617/violet-stars-story-starting-apply-drama-girlgroup-romance-sliceoflife-exo

Deadline: N/A

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/678319

Review: it is up to you :)

Other: so yea, this applyfic is seriously popular and it isn't a suprise I didn't get in. But I am curious to know where I went wrong so help me out? Thank you :)
HelloKitty10755
#11
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/574570/h-e-i-r-e-s-s-s-m-entertainment-s-new-girl-group-a-p-p-l-y-o-p-e-n-apply-shinee-snsd-smtown-exo-newgirlgroup
Deadline: TBA
Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/698693
Review: Chapter
Other: The author has told me that she like my app, but she hasn't posted a review yet and I don't think she will be anytime soon.
chocolakay #12
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/519185/winderx-s-m-entertainment-s-new-girl-group-apply-open-apply-bigbang-girlgroup-infinite-shinee-exo-applyfic
Deadline: TBA
Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/700600
Review: PM
Other: My third application I think? English is not my first language and the bullets keep disappearing on me. I expect anything from you since I need more critics and opinion to make it better, and the M mark keep appearing on me, sorry. And thanks before!
LebenVieKyrie
#13
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/510730

Deadline: N/A

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/673873

Review: PM

Other: I actually got chosen for the story with this app, but the author didn't give me any review, so I would like to read yours. Thank you very much!
nunchii #14
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/537711

Deadline: N/A

Application: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/658065

Review: Up to you.

Other: Tell me everything, I am expecting a low mark. English is not my first language. If you're wondering about the story, it's eyeslikestars, and it's one of her awesome group stories with a huge twist. And yes the deadline is over.