PictureMeBroken

 

 

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GRAPHIC REVIEW
DIFFICULTY: Strict

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Appeal - [Is the poster eye-catching?]: (11/15) : From the previous poster, the appeal wasn't that great. Now, however, the appeal has obviously increased!! The reader will feel the psychological effect, and may have an interest to the story. However, the poster is still quite dull. I will explain later in the review.

Text - [Does the text correspond with the graphic?]: (12/15) : I really like the way 'Killer' was marked in red. I'm guessing the font is 'Papyrus'? This is one of those default fonts; you should try installing a font that looks more...blood curdling. some good sites are www.dafont.com, or something of the such.

Professionalism - [Does the poster look professional?]: (13/15) : The poster is quite well for murder, etc. //thumbs-up

Technique - [Did the designer place the characters well? What about the blending and texture techniques?]: (31/40) : Your blending was well done. I liked the blood texture you used; but you might want to add another background texture like some trees. Tip: add in a picture of trees, and find the 'motion blur' option. set it to the 'overlay' mode, so it will add more suspense/quality to the graphic. Now on to the colors...they were a bit 'dull.' I understand this is angsty and psycho, but you should try inserting a 'psd,' or add in some coloring. It will capture a reader's attention.

Theme - [Did the poster match the theme?]: (15/15) : The theme was done well; I can now see the 'psycho' effect. The other genres were also done well, just like last time. (:

Enjoyment - [Bonus]: (4/5) : very well done! I must say, you have improved by lots!! Great job!

OVERALL GRADE: 86/100 B

GRADER'S NOTE:
Nice job! You've improved!! ^^ -treehugger

 

 

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