PictureMeBroken

 

 

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GRAPHIC REVIEW
DIFFICULTY: Strict

« LAYOUT INSPIRED BY FOREWORD

 

Appeal - [Is the poster eye-catching?]: (9/15) : The poster was sort of plain; it might not intrigue the reader into reading the story, if there is one. I will explain the details later.

Text - [Does the text correspond with the graphic?]: (10/15) : The title font is quite plain but I liked how you changed the color of 'Killer' into red; it gives it that 'feeling' that there is a killer.

Professionism - [Does the poster look professional?]: (12/15) : the poster looks like it is done by an amateur. It looks very simple.

Technique - [Did the designer place the characters well? What about the blending and texture techniques?]: (29/40) : The characters were placed well; the blending is still visible, however. You can see a fine line between Sehun and Kai's photos. You should add some textures to the poster, it makes everything better! (:

Theme - [Did the poster match the theme?]: (10/15) : I understand the angst feeling, and slight romance in the poster. The psychological feeling didn't get to me though. I know it said 'Killer' but that wasn't enough to unleash the psychological effect. Try adding some bloody textures to add to the genre.

Enjoyment - [Bonus]: (4/5) : the poster was pretty plain in general, but it is well done! It is suitable as a poster for a story. Good job!

OVERALL GRADE: 74/100 C

GRADER'S NOTE:
nice job!! keep practicing; you will get better! -treehugger

 

 

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