What do you think of this drawing/sketch?

Hey guys! ;)
 
So, today I've been drawing a bit again (only pencil) and it's nothing complicated or whatnot, only a very very simple drawing. However, I would love some feedback on it (and I'm certainly not going to show it to my parents or school friends because it's soooooo embarrassing OTL).
 

Get what I mean with embarrassing? The girl is basically and I'd feel extremely uncomfortable showing it my family (wtf I'd never do that and I hope they never find it).

I don't wanna sound like a ert, but I really enjoy drawing faces and bodies. I like trying to make the proportions perfect (according to what I consider perfect, of course). I love drawing the slim waist, the curve of the hips, and the collarbones, and stuff like that (okay, that sounds creepy).

Anyways, what do you think of it? ;)

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jellyfisher
#1
two things,
remember proportions
don't focus too much on the eyes
lovelypuppy #2
I really like it. ^^
The eyes especially ;)
Chajiguk-suho
#3
I'm enjoying to draw thoses things, too :)

I like the eyes, by the way
kintoun
#4
_______! /pokes /slapped
it was really beautiful though ; u ;
thanks for sharing! o/
chaseunae
#5
Whoa! It really is amazing, honestly. The shape of the body, the girl looks really y. The hair looks really smooth and Idek, I just love the hair. The eyes! oh gosh.. I seriously love your drawing :>
lovexo_xo
#6
i love the hips, slender arms and the petite heart-shaped face! Its gorgeous!
I can only draw half a face idek why =.= OTL

okay i really like the waist and hips! >.<
amayakurenai
#7
the eyes are amazing! :o i absolutely love them!~ i could never draw something like that. XD
MissSparkles
#8
My my... Look at those eyes! So pretty*.* And wow everything is perfect in proportion(: Such a great artist~
Nicole- #9
I LOVE THE EYES! ❤ I really like her body shape too, to me it looks well proportioned. ^^
yeolchans
#10
Wow her eyes are so detailed and enlarged. I think it looks alot like manga
blxckjxck
#11
the eyes look so cool and stuff XD they look real and awesome XD GOOD JOB!!
SincereSmiles #12
I really like the eyes :) It looks quite hypnotizing with a spark of curiosity, if that makes sense XD
Overall, it's really nice. In my perspective, the proportions seems perfect as well.