I wanted to ente a poetry contest but I wasn't sure if this was exactly Poetic.....I wanted to se what you guys think of my poem before I enter it.

As each day passes I continue to put up with your ignorance.  Many times that I pass by you don't give as much as a sideway glance. I wonder. Do you really care? Usually, a friend will always be by your side or was my assumptions wrong? I will continue to move forward, while you stay in the House of Ignorance. We're in two different worlds now but I don't regret the times we shared as friends. I shall continue walking as I enter the House of Change. I’m not necessarily going to say goodbye. Instead, I will say see you soon. For now, we will continue walking in our own world as the sun shines on the House of Redemption and Closure. Together...one day we will enter those houses. Until then I will cherished those precious moments we shared and wait for that day to finally come. My dear friend I will see you soon.

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