effing creying right now. i discovered a piece of writing i did in my 4th grade and it's just so cliche and short and will make you "wtf" for a moment i can't. here's the whole story. (original is written in indonesian).

[ WARNING: PREPARE TO LAUGH HYSTERICALLY AT MY FAILS AND BE DISGUSTED BY MY WRITING. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. ]

"Mom! Come on! The plane's about to take off!" Miu shouted as she chased her dad. "Please wait a second, dear!" Her mom said as she walked closely to Miu. "Ting ting ting... Garuda's Plane Boeing 7A 345, destination Bali will soon take-off. Attention Please." "Mom! Dad! Come on!" Miu said while she held herself closely to her father's arm. "Yes daughter! Here, we're going to the plane right now." Her father said softly. Miu was very happy. Her first trip to Bali with a plan will soon start.

"Hwaah!!! So cool! Kawaii!! (Cute!!)" Miu shouted happily, and because she's so happy, she used Japanese (she is Japanese alright). Miu was walking with her father's friend (Uncle Kurniawan) and his child Tadase when they arrived at Sanur Beach and saw a cave. "Can we enter that cave?" said Tadase which indeed was a boy. "Ok!" answered Miu and Uncle Kurniawan at the same time, And suddenly, they were into the cave that was caused by the black hole.

"CRASH!!!!" The ground resounded. "Ouch... It hurts!" Miu screamed loudly. "What's wrong Miu?" Tadase asked. "My leg is uhh... bleeding!" answered Miu while holding the pain. "Here Miu, a handkerchief to wipe your blood!" said Uncle Kurniawan while lending his handkerchief. "Thanks uncle!" Miu said while wiping her blood. "But uncle, ow are we going to get out from this cave?" Miu asked. "What's that?" Tadase questioned. "I... it's a black hole?" Miu asked. "Yes!" Uncle Kurniawan answered. Miu bravely went to the hole. Miu! Don't!" Tadase and Uncle Kurniawan screamed at the same time. Suddenly they were again in the black hole.

"Miu! Tadase! Wake up!" Someone shouted. "Ukh... mom?!" Miu shouted. "Aunt Melysa?" Tadase said. "We were on the Mysterious Cave before!" Miu and Tadase screamed. "What did you say? Mysterious Cave? Dad found you on the sand laying down!" Mom shouted confusedly. Miu and Tadase glanced at each other. It's really mysterious, yeah?

I'M CREYING OHMIGOD. IT'S JUST SO FAIL I CAN'T. TOO FAST PACED AND YOU CAN "WTF" AT EVERYTHING. THIS WAS WHEN I WAS IN 4TH GRADE, BTW. I WAS INFATUATED WITH SHUGO CHARA AND I AM A WEABOO. YEAH, SUE ME. IT'S BEEN 3 YEARS I'VE MATURED OKEI.

HAHA, OMG. I CAN'T.

WHEN THIS IS COMPARED WITH MY FIC "AETERNALIS" I MEAN WOW... LOOK. AT. THE DAMN. FANFIC. I'VE IMPROVED A LOT, I MUST SAY. NOT BRAGGING BTW. JUST. WOW. AETERNALIS IS THE RESULT OF READING ENGLISH NOVELS.

THIS IS THE POWER OF READING, PEOPLE.

IF YOU WANT TO IMPROVE IN WRITING, READ REAL NOVELS.