Obtaining Mr. (sneak peak)

 

Miracle? Do you want to ask me if I believe in miracle? Yes.. Now I believe in it.. I believe it when it gave me another chance to be with the people I want to be with.. but it wasn’t as easy as I think…

 

After being shot? I was secretly hospitalized by the government so that they can use me against the gangs in Seoul.. I was in coma cause when I shot myself I shot my heart and it was a bulls eye.. I hit it in the center.. Miracle brought me back to life I was hopeless.. I can’t move and I always end up crying even though I don’t want to.. I can’t control my eyes its always filled with water and I can’t control it.. it became a disorder.. After being discharge I was locked up in a warehouse I don’t know..

 

Tortured and interrogated.. It was hell and everyday.. it became worst to disaster.. They kept my records as a secret.. only a few of government official’s know about me being lock up but they can’t do anything cause they are afraid of HIM.. he controls everyone and he is the most powerful man in all South Korea.. the President. Kwon Monsoo. He is a living Lucifer. He has the money and the power that blinded everyone.. they became his puppet..

 

With money and people everyone became greedy and evil.

 

I want to escape but I can’t.. I’m too weak.

 

While on the other side of the country..

 

He was dead.. Not literary.. More or like mentally.. For the past 2 years that everyone thought you are dead he was the one who took it so deep. He still won’t talk to block-teen-finite.. he would only eat with his mother and dongsaeng then go back to his room and lock himself up the whole day..

 

 

You were abandoned on the warehouse.. the people who is torturing you had a break and went out to eat.. you were exhausted but you tried hard to escape.. the guards where sleeping and no one was there because it was abandoned. You weakly walk out of the warehouse and made your way away from the deadly warehouse. You walk and walk.. even though you are tired you still walk to get away..

Your feet took you to a beach and you lay on the sand. You fell unconscious not noticing 5 boys are coming towards you. one boy fell on his knees when he saw you.. *OH MT GOD!* tears started to drop from his eyes.. he wanted to go wild and kill the people who did this to you.. he love you so much that it hurts him like hell seeing you like this.. he knows you.. he knows you better than you know yourself.. he thought you were dead.. he was relieve but at the same time he was mad.. *I’M GONNA KILL THEM!!* he made sure to mark that as an important reminder.. s look at him confuse.. he just saw a random girl in the beach.. bath with bruises and blood he burst into tears.. they were dying in curiosity but waited for “him” to explaine.. the boy with a Mohawk hairstyle opened the door and the boy who cried caries you bridal style in the car as the other members went to there cars..

They drove to Pocheon Province. They live far from the center of the province.. where they can shoot and kill anyone without having police knowing.. they also have quite a reputation for being the “good Samaritans” but in the underworld.. there enemies call them Lucifer’s Messengers.. they would kill people who did something wrong or who are evil .. they would immediately send them to hell. When they arrive at there house.. he immediately carried you to his room and apply medicine to your wounds.. after seeing you resting.. he went downstairs to be greeted by s..

“Who is she?” ask the guy who where freakishly tall and has a deep husky voice.

You suddenly woke up .. when you saw where you were you examined the room and found a picture frame.. you took it and look at it carefully thinking that it might be the wrong person.. a boy who was too familiar with you and You!. You both were smiling happily..

*it can’t be!!!*

(down stairs)

“Jay?” an idiot looking blonde boy wave his hands in front of the boy and boy came back from thinking the past..

“huh?” he ask as he broke from a trance.

“who is she?”

“she?”

“yup.. hyung.. had been asking you that for more or like more than 20 times!” a boy with Mohawk hairstyle said.

“mian.. she is my sister!”

“SISTER??????” they all shouted..

“yup.. remember ~~~?”

“you told us about her.. but how did she end up-“

“please don’t remind me.. all im going to do is haunt those s who hurt her!”

Then a screeching sound echoed the whole house. A house of a glass being shattered on the ground.. he run to his room to find you on the floor weak and crying looking at the broken frame.. s followed.

As the door slowly creek open, the light from the hallway filled the dark room. The light showed you to the boy.

“~~~” he run to you

“DON’T…COME…NEAR..ME!!”  you said as anger started to overtake you.

“~~~~-“

“DON’T SAY MY NAME WITH YOUR LYING MOUTH YOU BASTARD!!” you yelled as you cut him off. After a few seconds s where at his back.. Looking at you sitting on the floor with bruises all over you and bandages of your wounds.

“~~~-ah!”

I said don’t ing CALL ME THAT!!!” you yelled again but this time with more force that you flinch in pain because of your wounds.

“kwenchana?” he run to you

“I SAID DON’T ING COME CLOSE TO ME!” you yelled again as tears started to flow from your eyes non-stop.

“I’m sorry! Okay!!! I’m sorry that I wasn’t there for you!!! I’m sorry that I left you I’m sorry if I abandoned you!!! it hurts me too!! It hurts me too!! To see our family crashing down!”

“well what do you think I felt??? Seeing them fighting and all and you walk away!!! You became a coward!! You chickened and walk away!!!!!!!!!” you yelled..

“what do you want me to do??!!! Don’t they live happily now? Mom lives alone.. dad has a family.. won’t they be satisfied?? Shouldn’t you move on! Your being childish!!!” he scolded you..

“childish?”

“yes!!! Clinging onto the past that is never going to be fixed EVER!!” he scolded again.. this time s flinch.. and became scared on how there friend scolded you.

“YOU DON’T ING UNDERSTAND!!!” you yelled as you tried to get up..

Even though your feet are trembling because you still haven’t had enough rest to gain your strength back.. you still tired.. you knees where shaking and you were pale as ever.

“you don’t ing understand!” you mumbled but he heard you

“WHAT IS IT THAT I DON’T UNDERSTAND GOD DAMN IT!!”

“you think she’s happy?”

“yes..!” he retorted but you laugh at him.. like you were not hurt at all.. you smirk

“hahahahah*evil laugh* you ing thought she was happy!!!!!” you yelled in frustration..

Tears started flowing again and this time it was heavier…

“HAPPY????? DO YOU REALLY THINK SHE IS HAPPY???”

“YES!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO REPEAT MYSLEF KWO-“

“SHE’S DEAD!!”

 You yelled that silence him.

 

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The sequel's link:

 

obtaining Mr. Unperfect: My second Chance

 

 

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qriyoung #1
I cant open the link author-nim :'( pls pls reply this. Your story are daebak!!!!! and i hope she end up with b-bomb and idk why actually. just that others keep on hurting her and i want her to be happy :)))) anyway thank you for writing this beautiful story <3 <3 <3
kpoplover215
#2
please update soon ~~~ thank you very very much !!!!!
dkhanani27 #3
update soonnnnn i really love this story i even act as ~~~~ and cried hahaha
oohjoy
#4
I have someone in mind on who her brother is....
Please make the sequel, author-nim!
SeoBaby4ever #5
Please update ~!!!!!!!!
littlegurl
#6
great sequel..can't wait anymore
ItzJaeKay #7
WAHHH OMG I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S NEXT OMGGGG
YeoJaGaSu
#8
Ooh... Ppalli! Write the rest!
fireblaze192
#9
wow... nice one kindly make it sooner /// damn it so breath taking... ^_^
WatashinoOrenji #10
OMG!!!This is so unexpected!!
I can't wait!!!!I wonder what's going to happen??
Update soon >.<
MeganxD #11
I can't freaking wait!!!!!!!