Just a note to the readers ^^

Heyy there everyone who's reading this :)

It's iiEatBubbls here with a request.

I have noticed that through out my... i think 8 fics? I have not recieved any criticism.

This may sound a little off....

But I actually want some criticism o_o

Call me crazy or... idk anything you like but i would really like some feedback that isn't all positive.

 

If I do not receive any bad reviews I assume everything is fine, but when I read back MONTHS later, i realised that I miss out on details, have spelling errors everywhere and certainly have made a lot of mistakes with time and place.

I think I mentioned this in every single on of my fics but I deleted the last Author notes (because they were too haywire O_O)

 

But please...

If there is anything.

Anything at all.

that bothers you about the fic, tell me through comments or inbox or even just msg my wall.

 

 

Right now, I'm sitting here... editing FFYA to make a pdf version and I have no idea how many times i have slapped myself across the facce for stupid errors o-o (I'm not even going to mention when I read MLMB again)

So~

 

Tell me what is wrong with my fics~
Which characters did you find confusing? 
Why did this happen and why did that happen?
Or just a plain 'I don't like this about this etc'

 

I welcome criticism with open arms T_T
Coz right now, I'm sitting here doing the same mistakes over and over D:

 

You can even say you hate the fic -shrug-

I don't mind.

Throw all your punches at me and I will work harder to block those punches in the future ^^

 

 

Don't be afraid about me getting all apesh*t on you. I would never do that to someone even if they did take my cookies. (A serious crime mind you)

 

 

 

I guess I repeated myself too many times in this one blog :\
Ah wells ^^

 

 

Bubbles out~

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FujinoLover #1
Sorry, I just found this out
I feel you *pats your back* Do you still want the criticism? I have some about FFYA.. Tell me and I will PM you about it but please don't get disheartened by whatever I say. I am a very blunt person

All Hail TaeNy~
rae_rae #2
Oh I do have something to say, I actually noticed those errors before but I shrugged them off. Alright so whenever i spot an error or a mistake, I 'd gladly point it out. Looking back, there are some errors on the fic. But those are minor details so I pressumed that you just overlooked on those stuff. I usually send pm's to authors whenever they had some errors. So yeah, I would like to help and point out if ever you'll overlook and make some mistakes. ^_^ but I must say, you commit little, as in LITTLE errors only. Like the pronoun? Or stuff. Regarding your fic's story line, I've got no complains actually. I love all your stories. And compared to MLMB 1st version, I can say you've improved a lot.

Oh and I agree with ShinyAvarice regarding FMTY, i personally think it would've been better if you had just left it with that angsty ending. I mean I was devastated when TaeYeon died. But after reading the follow up story, i somehow felt that the story's impact was, I dunno, lessened? It decreased? But over all, I loved the story.
ShinyAvarice #3
Well I had no Idea you felt that truly.
I try to criticise you're fics but I have problems with grammar and don't tend to notice the spelling and punctuation mistakes but I do try to point out continuity errors but again I don't tend to notice them too much (except in FFYA with Seohyun finding out about the immortality but I guessed you had a plan for that)

One quick criticism I have is to do with From Me, To You. I did love it but I would have preferred an angst ending where Tiffany eventually moved on with her life but never truly loved again but not in a suffering way. I know you're not an angst author like fuujinolover(?) but in TBF I found the sad ending it the emotional chords a lot better than the fluff ending.

There is more I'm sure and I'll be sure to tell if it helps you to improve your style of writing. I'll actually post my full, lets call them reviews, on your wall cause you get lots of comments on your stories that I don't want you to spend all your time reading comments,I know you probably don't mind through all the comments but I would like too make it a little bit easier for you.

Avarice Hwaiting
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