I Want to Know What You Think of My Title

I've come up with a title for my fic, but I want to know what you think of it. It's called, "The Soaring Phoenix and the Rising Dragon" I like it, but some may think it's a bit cheesy. So what do you think? I'm still doing research about the Tang Dynasty!

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inthesujuworld234 #1 May 2, 2012 20:04:07

LongFeng is the equivalent I mean. I just want to keep the title from becoming too long.

inthesujuworld234 #2 May 2, 2012 01:45:35

Thanks! I was doing my research when I came across a something about the Phoenix representing the empress and the Dragon representing the emperor. There's a Chinese equivalent and it's called FengHuang, but no one would know what that would mean so I used the cheesy English version.

ErisChaotica #3 May 2, 2012 01:36:12

You're right in saying that it sounds a bit cheesy, but I think it's memorable and distinct enough that the cheesiness can be overlooked. It certainly stands out among the other titles you see around AFF. I'd definitely click into a story with that title over "____ IS MY ARRANGED HUSBAND?!!?!."

Also, yay you for doing research! Keep it up, and good luck with your writing!