http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/39107/the-life-drifter-b1a4-b2st-beast-kpop-shinee-snsd

I'm thinking about rewriting "The Life Drifter". It's probably my favorite story that I've written. If I rewrite it, it'd be much longer, probably with more detail. And it'd follow Jonghyun and YuChi's relationship closer and for a longer time period. And I wouldn't include her best friends story. I would also probably change YuChi's name, and make her a little more sarcastic. So what do you think? Any other suggestions?