New EXO fanfic sneak peek

Annyeong!! ^^

 

Anyone still alive after watching MAMA? ... No one... oh well.. I'll still post this then. XD

Since everyone has been so kind at my oneshots/twoshots with EXO. 
I'm currently trying to write a chaptered fanfic with EXO.
I'll give you some sneak peeks and other stuff, now:

 

 

EXO Warriors:

(Not the poster, I'll make one if I'm succeeding with the story.^^
That means if I like it, and if doesn't end up as ! >.<)

 

Main character: Sehun.

 

Main pairing: HunHan (since Sehun is the main character)

Genre: Super natural, fantasy, other stuff.

Rated?: Yes :3

Long story?: Yes yes, the first chapter is already written,
I'm just going to find a way to cut it. xD

Other pairings?: Since I'm over in the (boyxboy) section, yes other pairings are going to be there! ;)

Sneak peak?

Here's a part of the first chapter (not really exciting since it's only the start. <.<):

 

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Suho putted the key in the door but he stopped. I cocked an eyebrow as he pushed the door open.

  “Don’t we usually lock it?”

  “Maybe they forgot?” We step inside without hearing Chanyeol’s amplifier on. He always play guitar when we have relaxing time. But I don’t mind it. I can still sleep since he’s pretty good at it. So it sounds nice. The lights are off, and we take ourselves in looking around, Suho slowly closes the door and I feel myself get chills. What is the meaning with this? “Is it someone’s birthday or something? Have we forgotten anything?” I say and stare at the window, the curtains are not letting much light get into the room. Usually Kyungsoo would’ve pulled them away letting the light come into our little dorm. I feel Suho grab my arm and I exhale in relief that he’s here too. Something is wrong. Something is really wrong.
Why can’t I hear Baekhyun singing his rock voice while Chanyeol is playing guitar? Where is the delicious smell of Kyungsoo’s food? Where is Kai’s usually high Jazz or other dance songs? Why, is there so silent?
I feel myself dying inside, I hate scary movies… the members know how scared I get. I literally die inside when people scare me. Where’s Luhan, where’s the others. Why do I suddenly feel so alone?

  “Sehun… Someone is stan…”

He doesn’t get to finish, because the lights goes on immediately, and reveals two men dressed in black suits standing in the middle of our living room.

  “We would be pleased if you didn’t try to run or fight, we’ve already tried that and it didn’t end well. Thank you.” The monotone voice rung and send shivers down my spine. I felt my breath get taken away in fear, and I grabbed Suho’s hand. “Suho, Sehun. The leader and the Maknae of EXO. I’m glad you’re okay.” What the was he talking about? Why did he sound so ing cliché like? Was he playing a game or something? Was there a hidden camera? WHAT WAS HAPPENING!?

  “Sehun, breathe, calm down.” Suho’s calming voice filled my mind, and it made me wake up. I was literally breathing hard and my eyes were shooting daggers in the men’s direction. I removed my gaze and I felt Suho give my hand a squeeze.

  “EXO, we’ve chosen you for special reasons. Get your stuff and follow us. Oh, and leave any phones computers, ipods, any contact to this world. You’ll meet your members when we arrive at the camp.”

I and Suho shared a gaze; we eyed the two men and then looked at each other again. Fighting would be stupid. These guys werebig, had weapons and was probably not alone like us… I sighed and gave them a glare that meant, ‘I’ve given up’. And Suho looked at me with apologetic glance, then he bowed to them. No smile, no niceness at all. Suho was definitely not happy to give up to them, to risk him and me to get hurt. I gave his hand a squeeze and waited for them to approach us, and then lead us out. Maybe bind our hands, knock us out or kill us? I didn’t know, but I feared the worse. But as I thought about what opportunities we had, two men grabbed us from behind. Then we got pushed into our room.

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Another sneak peek longer inside the story:

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  “You seem quite concerned about your members, huh?” The tone the man had really annoyed me. He seemed so curious and I knew he had only bad things to tell me. Things that would make me even more concerned. “You know we’ve gathered every EXO member.” – Wait what?! Every member? That mean Luhan must be… Oh my! – “EXO-K was a lot easier to handle, or well you just made it worse.” – I rolled my eyes at him, and crossed my arms, still with a concerned frown on my face. – “EXO-M has some strong members, and when one of them broke into tears, and we needed to drag him out of the place. Another one stepped in. Oh well, we accidently hurt him, but he just screamed even more in panic, and the Martial fighter stepped in with the oldest that knows Taekwondo, and they fought against us. We needed to knock them out before they relaxed, but don’t worry. We have a hospital at the camp, they are there now, and soon they’ll be okay again.” I dropped my jaw. I dropped my hands. I dropped every single thing in my world and let it all crash against the floor. They ing beat Tao and Minseok up?! They made them go to hospital?! OH MY GOD! WHY DID THEY EVEN FIGHT?! Who cried, who would cry? Kris, no. Lay, no. Chen, ye… ah, no. Luhan? Yes. THEY HURT LUHAN!?

I started to move uncontrollable in my seat, and sat up straight. “Is the person who cried okay?” I asked trying to control my anger as much as I could. My Hyung. My Hyung.

  “Yes or well… I thought he was a weak person, but when he saw the Martial guy get hurt, he started beating the guards that held him up. We… also knocked him out…” The guy hesitated at last since he somehow knew that I cared for that person. And that when it came to people I cared, I got dangerous. Just like Luhan. Lu fought against the guards when he saw s get hurt. !
Instead of starting to tear the seat in front of me apart, I let my forehead smash against the window, and I ignored the throbbing in my whole head, and just felt the cold window cool me down. The cool feeling spread into my face and flowed down my back. I stared into the emptiness and felt Luhan’s beating heart get nearer. Luhan, I’m gonna find you, and I’m gonna check if you’re okay! But also just to know that Tao, Minseok and other members could be hurt right now, is really bothering me. I can’t wait to get reunited with them. And to get to them faster, I’ll sleep.

Somehow the thought about sleeping calmed me down, and that also meant that I didn’t need to listen to the dork talking about us again. Bloody idiot...

 

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What do you guys think? ^^

I don't have that many friends, but I'll only post it here, so the people that gets to see it... Well your lucky! ^^

I need to write a LOT more before starting to upload, okay? :)))

And I also have a oneshot to finish. <.<

 

See you guys later! BYE! ^^

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