Hey Panda! Thanks for applying for another DAL Media story, lets get right into your review.

There is nothing wrong with your application. I really like the way you approached this matter with Yeolmae. There are just a couple of things I would like you to add to her application. First off, even though she has passed could you add Yeolmae's best friend to her relationship section and also her parents as it seems they have helped her a lot?

Another small thing is that since Hyojin comes from a very well of family and I think it would be difficult for Yeolmae to live in the dorm with her daughter, Hyojin would probably pay for her to live in a small apartment in the same building (probably the same floor) as the other Pandora members rather than having her live in the chaos of the dorm with a young daughter.

All in all, I think Yeolmae is a unique approach to the undesirable plotline and think she could be an interesting character to write! For now I am going to add her as pending on the applicant page so please let me know when you have added those relationships and I will change her to accepted! Thanks!