I've been writing stories for years, and I think that in the past I've added some on this wonderful website as well. I hope I'll be back soon and add a webtoon here and everywhere else that they'll have me! But I need your help ASAP!!!

I'm looking for three people excited or enthusiastic enough to help me get feedback on my first chapter of this story.

1/ The first person oughts to give me an objective opinion on the characters, their development and entrance in the story, the descriptions, the start and the and of the chapters, the quality of humor used and how to improve my writing so it becomes easier for the readers to follow.

2/ The second person should be able to recognize the humor I use and the possible inuendos I make regarding laughter or hidden jokes. They should be able to tell me if it feels too much or out of the place/blue and help me find the middle ground. If suggestions arise for other paragraphs or situations described, I need those as well.

3/ The third person should subjectively tell me if they enjoy the story or not. If as a reader they like the pace and the characters. Be it their names, their personalities, if they want more descriptions regarding the buildings and street names or even the materials of what some stuff is made. I want to know if they smiled or laughed or giggled and if they think it's worth making a webtoon out of it.

Spoiler: Luhan will be a main character. The story will be called: my not so friendly stalker. Both Kaeya and Tony will like him and only one will date him while the other one will sulk until someone else enters her life. Lots of twists and turns and funny outcomes! Hope I've said enough for now! Let me know if you need any more info though!

See ya~