First and foremost, I have found this really nice reviewshop

《 KeePer 。》—「a review thread」

Thank you very much Mia for taking the time to review my story and thank you for not being too harsh on your words and did it professionally. I really appreciate that. Your advices are really helping me a lot and now, I'm going to do as what you suggested ^^; Thank you! 
If anyone is looking for a review, a good and constructive review, then I highly suggested that you head over to this review shop. Mia is a wonderful person and she's nice too. She doesn't sugar coat her words and tells you exactly what you needed and none of her words are actually hurtful or demotivated you from writing

Before You Go

So based this review, I will draft my story for a brief while to reconstruct and rewrite them all.
Until then, my dear readers, please be patient :)