Hello peeps

as the title suggest, Im in a (dire) need of someone to help me edit my story. This is the first long piece i've written after a long bout of writer's block and i feel like it's..... very messy. I need a fresh pair of eyes to look at it and give me f e e d b a c k oh yes pls.

what I need you to do:

- Continuity check (general plot maintanence ya know just seeing if all plot points make sense in relation to each other)

- Pacing check (i guess this is the most important bit. Help me decide which parts needs to be cut and which prt needs to be expanded)

- minor grammar check (dont need to do this if you're too lazy. But i mean if you see super blatant grammar mistake, it'll be nice if you can idk highlight it so i can fix it later)

Some details of the story:

- group/pairing: NCT/JenoxRenjun (you dont need to stan them to do this, but i know it might be easier for you if you do)

- genre: soft angst/dark comedy/friendship/major character death :))

- wordcount: 15k ... yes i know its quite big for a oneshot...

lastly, and most importantly, compensation! 

If you have paypal i'll legit pay you. If you dont have them, i'll buy you pizza? Idk but the point is, i will give yall monetary compensation if we can work out how so 

comment or pm me if you're interested! Thankk