HELP! Is my story description ty?

"In a world where I prefer to be alone, Sehun just somehow draws me a little closer."

That's my story foreword for my new sehunxoc fic. 

Is it good? It's past midnight where I'm at and my brain is not working for the ing life of me. And neither are my fingers. So I've turned to the AFF community. DO NOT FAIL MEH NOW PLEZ.

Anyway, my foreword. Is it too vague or is it enough to draw readers? Be straightforward. I need honest advice. Thanks peeps~ anything helps.

ALSO, PLEASE COMMENT.

-April 

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tourmaline #1
i agree that it's a good start but imo it's phrased a little awkwardly. i do like it though!
bluelixir #2
Personally, it's just my style! If you check out any of my story descriptions, they're all along the same lines, so honestly can't give great criticisms.
Jaydreamer #3
I think it's a good start, just too vague. Vagueness is good in some ways, so you don't give away too much of your story, but I think you should add in a bit more, like anything interesting about the setting/time period, a hint of conflict, something a little more to draw readers. :)
itsatale #4
I think that it's quite good. It's vague yet catchy but we can definitely catch the hints of what the story is going to be about.
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