So, I've seen many stories on AFF that goes like this

Taemin: Key hyung! Where's my banana milk?

Key: I don't know *shrugs* *flips page of a magazine*

Taemin: *pouts* But it's gone! They're gone!

Key: *stands up* Who will take your banana milks?!

You see, I think that's how you write a script for a play, not a story. If you write stories, things should go like this:

Taemin opened their refrigerator to get a bottle of banana milk, but to his surprise, the banana milks he bought the other day, are gone. "Key hyung! Where's my banana milk?" He asked Key who was lying on the couch a few steps away from him. 

"I don't know." Key replied and shrugged his shoulders, flipping the page of the magazine he is reading. 

"But it's gone! They're gone!" Taemin said as he pouted.

Key stood up and asked, "Who will take your banana milks?"

You see the difference? That's how you write a story. 

It's not that I'm hating on these type of stories, it's just that, I think it's not the right way to write a story, I've written a story like that before and to tell you honestly, I knew I was doing something wrong, I was kind of forced to write that way, and I didn't liked it. 

So, this is just a tip to y'all~ 

And it makes your reader imagine it more clearly I guess.