beta? ;u;

So currently, I'm working on a three-shot Fanxing fanfiction and would anybody like to beta it? Like you know, fix the grammar mistakes and whatnot? Or if you could suggest a shop to me that would be very great too! Tysm ;u; and also, here's a snippet of it.

 

At twenty seven years old, Kris can't ask for anything more. His business, or rather, his family's business is running well and smoothly, he lives in an expensive pent house with his five-year old son who will be starting pre-school soon and he thinks he's more anxious than Ace about this whole school thing, he's a single father at the age of twenty seven and these are the woes of a twenty-seven year old, balancing his work and his son's needs and maybe even trying to find a mother for his son but that was the last thing in his list as for now... at the least.

 
This is also when and where a certain Zhang Yixing pops into his life, or rather, their life.
 
 
So yeah, kinda like a daddy!au or smth. That's it ;u; Thanks~

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
MintyPetals
#1
I think your english is really good and you don't need a beta but I could suggest breaking up that long sentence in the snippet, haha.