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TRAN AIRIHARU
TRAN AIRIHARU
 
THE SOCIALITE
 
 
 
*:・゚✧ life isn't that important, try
living at ease please -- I can see your pores widening
by the second.
 
 
 
 
 

 
full name  — tran airiharu / 陳愛莉春 
nicknames 
tran huyen + aestice tran (aye-stiss) ; vietnamese & english name -- given to her by her parents, mostly her parents and siblings call her by her japanese and vietnamese name, but everyone is free to say her english name
airi / haru ;; just shorter versions of her name, however it's mostly her closest buddies and people around her that could freely interpret her name another way
two-faced princess ;;   her actions became worthy of this nickname, her friends half the time couldn't tell if thei girl was really snaking them or actually meaningful, but truth be told, she's all for her friends but a real fake one to others. however, there are times she can be two-faced and her friends ask if she is but she replies with a simple, no silly.
birthdate — may 31, 1998
korean + int'l age — 19 + 18

 
birthplace — kyoto, japan
hometown — tokyo, japan
 
ethnicity — half vietnamese half japanese
nationality — japanese
languages
english ;; fluent -- growing up, being multilingual was already hard enough having to be a mix, adding on another language was a mess for her. however, she was taught english as more than just a school subject, her parents made her learn outside of school too. soon enough she became fluent. 
japanese ;; fluent -- self-explanatory, growing up in the country, going to the school that speaks it and having parents speak it, what more could be explained?
vietnamese ;; conversational -- at one point in her life time growing up, she was considered fluent, she always spoke it with her father and grandparents and other family members, it was great. but as she began to be cluttered with english (and later korean) and seeing her family less, she used the language less and less. she wasn't good as she used to be, but she could definitely hold up a conversation for more than ten minutes. 
korean ;; semi-fluent -- before being sent off to aejung by her parents, they had given her some private tutors to learn the language so she wouldn't arrive dumb and not knowing the language. however, she picked up the language pretty quickly and had adapted it to it well, but isn't amazingly fluent just yet. 
 
"PLEASE, ME UGLY? I'M THE MOST GORGEOUS HERE."
 
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face claim — nana komatsu
backups — wjsn's meiqi
height & weight — 170cm + 53kg
 
appearance — airiharu's face could described as very mysterious, her face normally have rare emotions but there are the times where she cracks and smiles and it seems to be the most heartwarming thing ever. but just her aura in general walking through the hallways, it makes people curious of whom she really is.  in her group of friends, besides the boys, she's quite tall and quite a fit slender type figure. she wasn't the one with the very petite stature in the first place, she works out quite often and has a nice curve in her body. her collarbones are the love of her life and show quite often. her hair is always a nice dark brown to black with forehead bangs or side bangs, sometimes it gives her a look of innocence. 
 
style — her fashion since isn't that much, her closet for her day clothes are quite neutral tones with the occasional pop of color to balance out the closet for funerals. however though, she dresses in a way because first impressions are everything to her. even if it maybe seeing her walk on the street for two seconds, she still wants to hear that, wow, escapre your lips. her night clothes are a bit different though, it's a closet with a wide range of styles and she can mix and match those outfits and still look gorgeous. she tends to hate looking like a slob in public so tries her best a lot to look good, so even if she were to put on a sweatshirt and sweatpants, some how she'd look relly done up and fashionable. there's really no style she sticks too, she can go from casual to super dressy  -- it changes everyday according to her mood. anyone could say whatever they want about her style, she doesn't really care because she knows she looks good either way. 
 
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"DON'T START ARGUMENTS WITH ME
WHEN YOU'LL JUST
LOSE, SWEETIE."

 
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traits —

gemini troublemaker lady tom
THEY LOVE ME... humorous loyal adaptable adventurous
short-tempered blunt intimidating arrogant
... THEY LOVE ME NOT

   

personality —
 
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"make way for the two-faced foreign princess." 
- seo yerim, editor of the grapevine, year 12
 
she, airiharu was always considered two-faced in multiple ways. but that doesn't make her a bad person -- she has her reasons, at least. just as everybody views her to be -- mysterious, they don't really know anything about her besides the fact she's a huge party goer, friends with almost anyone (though, she's selective about who's her closest) and always up for a good time. the girl will tell anyone anything and lie about anything to anyone, when people talk about her, her stories never match up. she dislikes people knowing her personal details for the fun of it. people give her the two-faced nickname because they feel as if she looks down on others and thinks it's all fun and games to joke, but really they're just bitter they have nothing to really exploit her on. so no one really knows who she is, except for a few human beings. 
 
"very alluring you are, airi -- wish i could be you."
- koto takashi, cousin, age 16
 
airiharu had been box of surprises. she had this vibe that made her seem mysterious, but when people were able to go past that stage, she was just a huge jokester. she loved making jokes out of anything and wasn't actually a serious type person. in fact, she hated when any atmosphere ws too serious and would be the moodmaker almost. but then again, she knew when it was time to be serious and not around. she is constantly loyal to everyone around her and adapted to things very easily. best believe once she was connected to certain people she considers close, no way she was gonna do anything to backstab her friendship with them. she adapted to her surroundings very easily no matter how much inside, she felt like she disliked it. you gotta be adaptable no matter what to get far into life. to say she was boring is such an insult to her, even her friends would consider that an insult. this girl was friends with everyone and would do anything at anytime. carefree about it all. she was too connected and involved with everything around her to live painstakingly normal. she had the money to do whatever too... so why not go all out. 
 
"have you ever heard of jekyll and hyde? have you ever met her?
tran airiharu, the second half of her is horrible." 

- christina jung, jv tennis, year 9
 
to be called jekyll and hyde was quite a compliment to airiharu, she loved that book. nice try, loser, it's gonna take a little more to hurt me. though, her otherside of her personality isn't very... pretty? she's got quite the temper. she gets mad very quickly, if people decide to test her and her actions or purposely trigger her, she'll very much get angry. she won't show it at first, it'll slowly start to increase. starting with a small question like, oh really? or why not --, etc, etc it has a slight condescending tone, making you question yourself if what you said was right. but then at that point, you've dug yourself a hole and can't get out of the situation. people tend to think they can argue their way out but it doesn't work, she'll argue, yell, curse, sometimes throw things or shove if she was that angry. her friends tend to be careful about what they say around her because she's pretty intimidating. people get initmidated by her very often, her voice naturally isn't soft or calm like other girls, it's quite judging and scoff-ish like. 

she's blunt and honest as hell. she says things like it is, no such thing as sugar-coating. if theres anything she hates, its when people don't tell it straight to her face, she doesn't really care if anyones feelings is hurt after what she said. the girl is arrogant as hell too, she thinks of herself too high and everyone hates it. she gasses herself up too much // sorry i'm not worried about anyone else than myself, you might actually be prettier if you focused on yourself too, darling. people take it that she's rude but that's just how she is. no one is above her except her family and no ones on level with her except her friends. she just considers her arrogant act as confidence. 
 
background —
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who is mr. tran and miss. yakai?
- originally, mr. tran was an exchange student from vietnam, studying in japan. whilst studying there, he met a lovely young japanese woman named, yakai hashiwaru. the two had fallen in love years later and gotten married. in their late twenties, an idea -- a really stupid one to be honest the time, they wanted to come up with their ramen brand. there weren't many processed and packaged noodle companies at the time. just two young lovers with a stupid idea. within a few years, their company shot through the roof. exporting their packaged ramen to asia, europe and northern america. later by the birth of airiharu, they had decided to add on and open up an actual ramen shop and that business -- both businesses in fact have been doing well. as the years went by, the family had decided to open up a few more restuarants in different areas across the globe. 


"i'm excited to have a sister, mom, dad! she's our own
princess!" - khanh, brother - age 5

the birth of huyen, aestice, airiharu, age 1 - 4

as is, she became the princess of the house. of course, growing up, she was spoiled, but she was taught not to be too greedy in life. she was an energetic child with great beauty, cherished by everyone a lot. her brother and her were always seen together playing around and having fun looking out for each other. though there were moments in life when her parents weren't around, but she didn't take that too much to heart. mom dad have to work to be able to get you want, ok sweetie? if there was another thing about her as a child, it was that she was a huge rascal. she constantly drew on walls, took fish out of the tank and left them out to die - gasping for air, played with fire and lit the carpet, etc. this girl was an endless mess and was so much to take care for.
 
"i was supposed to be the only one, you don't care about me."
- airiharu, age 6
glory days, age 5 - 12
 
she began entering school and showed a great deal of interest in everything around her, she adapted quickly and loved school. she didn't have to be at home often. however, her dislike for being at home grew due to the birth of yeu. of course, every child needs attention, especially if it is a new one into the family. she disliked the fact yeu would get all the attention over her. that just added oil to the fire. over time, even as a young child, she would do whatever to "hurt" her younger sister. like push her over if she was walking, or trip her, or accidentally cut her hair and throw her stuff away. i just wanted her to feel angry and run away. her older brother loved both sisters and have to comfort both. this was around the time she got into swimming. it made her forget for a few hours who she had to see at home and felt more loved by her teammates and coach then at home. reaching the age of rebellion, she was those rare weird kids who got their period super early and this began her through her ride of weird emotional hormones. it gave in to times where she cherished her parents, times where she did the typical teenage, ugh - dad leave me alone! everyone at school wears eyeliner this dark! it was a horrifc ride and time for her parents to say the least. 
 
"aunt, uncle - don't worry. she'll be fine,
I'll watch over her!" 

- aiko seitsuko, cousin, age 14
 
the birth of airiharu, age 13 - present day
 
growing up, everyone called her however they liked, but officially before she had been sent of to korea - she wanted to be called airiharu but everyone she knew and only people who were close to her on a personal level could call her by her other names. this period of time and continuing was known for her creation of lies and actions. in a way, this was a secret personality of her that not many people knew about. not even her cousin seitsuko who would be attending aejung just like airiharu. at age 13 was a wave of her just slowly beginning to grow up. however, when she reached age 14/ 15, she attended aejung. this began the creation of her socialite rep. away from parents, living in a shared apartment space with her cousin and a 2x monthly allowance - who to say airiharu wasn't happy. this little fairy was a talker, she knew almost everything and almost knew everyone, the rich ones in school and the secret scholarship students. she knew about people's business and who's dating who, who's cheating, etc, etc. but it's a wonder if she knows and she'll use it to exploit others. 
 
web forum:
 
[+234, -76] i heard she knows everything about everyone... even the principal!
she even blackmails!!


[+43, - 12] what joy does anyone find in hurting others like
that, geez, grow up. 
 
[+567, -83] kekek... is it true she doesn't date but sleep around? i saw
her last night at k****** party, asked her out got rejected, but
saw her go into someones room last night with someone


 
swimmer's thoughts:
 
cheng xiao, year 2 - jv // i don't speak sunbae often besides listen to her orders... but it seems like, well i heard from one of the other students at school someone found out a secret of hers and she was really angry and paid someone to shut them up. 
 
nam joohyuk, year 3 - varsity // airi and i had a thing for a few months before she left me in the cold without an explanation, but the girl hides a lot of things. that's all i can really tell ya.
 
oh sehun, year 3 - varsity // i dislike her, she knew something about me and used it against me and teased me and bullied me on ends for it. 
 
kim yerim, year 1 - jv // sunbae has always been kind to me, i look up to her. but i heard there's a lot of bad sides to her but i don't even touch that topic in case she goes at me. 
"#RAMENFAMILY #BLESSED BY
THE WAY THESE ARE MOM'S HASHTAG
"

family 
father, tran hoang + 52 short-tempered optimistic quiet strict // 6/10 + growing up, she didn't have the very best relationship with her father, because she was the first girl born, he prized her very much and was overprotective of her. not saying it was bad, but she wanted to breathe, she wanted a life. once she had hit puberty, she and her father communicated less and if anything they got into more fights and arguments. however, there are times she wishes she could turn back to time and be daddy's little girl again but she knows that means she wouldn't be able to do the things she wants. she'd be sheltered away again. 
mother, yakai hashiwaru + 48 pessimistic worriful short tempered judging loyal // 6/10 + if the role between parents were bad cop, good cop, and her father was already the bad cop -- her mother was the badder cop. she disliked her mom growing up. they never got along or met eye to eye on anything. her mother and her were basically opposites from each other, her mom was conservative while she was up to date with trends and wanted to be wild. her mom never approved of her actions. however, as she started growing up, her mom worried about her less and focused on the younger sister more. she doesn't talk to her mom often, except for at dinner or when they're both in a good mood. 
brother, tran khanh (yokiharu) + 23, optimistic chill humorous impatient humble // 9/10 + her big brother has been there for her since her birth. he loves airiharu dearly and treats her with much love. whenever she'd get in trouble he'd defend her and always play with her even if they have five year difference. he's always there for her. 
sister, tran yeu (aikohina) + 16, energetic loud boastful judging sympathetic // 4/10 / the younger sister that airiharu would say she hates more than anything. she wasn't happy when her time of birth came around, she assumed it'd be another boy sibling, however it turned out to be a girl. around the time of yeu's 4'th birthday was around the time airiharu started acting up with her parents. her parents attention averted to yeu rather than her and it was something she disliked so much and felt like she was being thrown away. of course, they're grown up now, but she still has a feeling of hate toward her and rarely talks to her unless the younger girl needs help with school. 
 cousin, aiko seitsuko + 18, cool quiet non chalant impulsive cocky // 8/10 + the two girls live together in their shared spacious luxury apartment. sent over by their parents to learn and stop messing around in life, the two don't say hi or speak to each other in class/ school. they kept a promise to not meddle into each other's life. but when they're at home chilling with each other, it's all jokes and laughter

friends —
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best friends, kyun jinye + 18, perfectionist
judgemental loyal aggressive // 9/10
— as though, the school deems the two as a "matchmade in heaven" type best friends. but that wasn't always the case. the two heads butted against each other with their differences when they were in class and assigned into projects together. the only thing the two had in common was that they were both judgemental and critical towards each other. however, they hadn't become friends until a student had verbally harassed jinye and of course, like per usual, it hadn't bothered her. though, it bothered airiharu -- she just wanted to get her work done and move on but some asshat got in the way of that. the tall girl stood up and slightly gave the smaller girl a push and told her to get away, still not budging she had just pushed the girl til she had fallen. you didn't have to do that. // i know but i just want an A on this project and get it over with // she'll tell on you for shoving her // things like that don't matter when you're defending a friend. the two are the two type of buddies that will insult each other and point out the obvious and go at each other's throats. however, there's rare hard feelings and jinye is the person she always goes to for advice or a ride home from a party. if anything, she knows airiharu's deepest secrets too. 
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co-captain, hwang taeguk + 18, calm understanding
forgiving insecure pessimistic // 8/10
— taking care of a team with more than members is extremely hard, you have your varsity, your jv and your lovely freshmen. of course, this is no problem for airiharu, she loves the sport and that's why she's captain, well also bc she's really good at swimming. taeguk is the same year with her and when she transferred to aejung and joined the team, he was always her training buddy. the two worked really well together in terms of teamwork and personality. however, airiharu happens to be the captain that is a lot more stricter and pushes everyone hard and over the top while taeguk happens to be a little nicer, kind. that's why some people skip the days it's airiharu's turn to help train the swimmers - besides that fact, he's also someone who's constantly there for her when she needs advice. ok, next, we'll do IM order but each is a 500 -- \groans and whines\ I'll add in another 200 if you guys -- // ok, look you take someone and help their , I'll handle the sets. // taeguk I'm not gonna go easy when season is coming up // the POOL HEATER BROKE AND THEY'RE FREEZING IT'S JANUARY AT 9PM LETS JUST GIVE THEM AN EASY DRILL // ... geeeeez man, I'll go talk to coach about the heater then... 

others — n/a
 
TRIVIA
likes — 
- coffee
- fruits & veggies
- cats (a killer for those but sadly allergic, risks it anyways to keep one around)
- dad jokes 
- conspiracy theories
- perfumes & colognes
- silk 
- seafood
- alcohol
dislikes 
- people who take everything up the (oh the hypocrisy, this is her sometimes 2 yikess)
- insects/ arachnids

- dogs (ms. sensitive and overly allergic)
- overly sweet things
- mushrooms
- being unheard 
- donuts or chocolate
habits — 
- sleep walking 

- sleeping in class 
- paying for others (offering to pay for everyone, or freely buying things for others bc she feels like it)
- switching up her languages, some times she mixes japanese and english or japanese and vietnamese or english and korean, etc, etc
- cusses really often

hobbies — 
- going on food trips
- road trips to the beach or mountain, any where
- karaoking 


sports — swim // captain mainstroke: back & fly
 
random facts:
- left handed
- allergic to dogs & milk
- hates sleeping in the dark
 
 
 
#20
wealth — 
aaahh... the ramen family, whenever her mom posts a photo on facebook it oozes #familygoals #ramenfamily #blessed. not only is her parents lovely food company famous in japan, it is known all over the world. every year, the company does a special collab with other famous companies as marketing to bring up each other's stocks and fame. being famous for pacakged ramen is weird, but hey the man who created the red dole cup got rich off AND famous of it. and that's just a cup. it is unclear for now whether it'll passed down to khanh, her older brother or her. but in any given moment, airiharu would pass it to her brother, as she has her own path. 
 
currently, she's living in a luxurious 2-story apartment with her cousin, seitsuko and the two get a 2x monthly allowance. one for the beginning of the month and the end of the month about 20 grand beginning and 20 grand at the end, totalling to 40 grand a month. she spends it on whatever but knowing her it's food and clothes and paying others to do her dirty work or keep quiet. oh my, so the rumours are true? yes, no - maybe so. she currently owns and drives around in a rolls royce ghost and has two siamese cats. yes, i'm allergic - but i take medicine whenever I'm home. she has another car which she doesn't use on a daily besides it being for road trips and that's her mecedes benz G550 SUV.
 
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school life — airiharu's life in school is a bit all over the place. there are times it could be boring and normal like any other day or just out of the extraordinary. however, for the most part the actions and fun happen outside of school. for airiharu, her favorite subject had always been history/ politics/ government. she was always intrigued by history and the way it formed the future and imagine what would've really happened if it the opposite result happened. not only that but she had a love for politics and government and will take anyone up for a debate anyday. (hint hint this child make do something involving gov and politics in her future, and maybe not the packaged ramen business yikess--) a thing about her is she's not stupid - in fact, she's quite smart but she purposely acts stupid. if there's anything she hates, it's being compared to others about her test scores or grades, etc. the whole school just thinks she's some dumb crackhead who could give two s about school. however it's always proof how smart she is when she lands in top 20 list, it doesn't bother whatever placement she is, as long as she's within 20 and not over.

the school going in trimesters make it a lot harder for her to mess around and slack off because the window for grades being due are shorter, but that doesn't mean she's always working hard. she still saves time for some fun. she's known all around school and quite popular. she's acquaintnces with almost everyone but only has a few close friends. since having to enter the school, she also became the school's star swimmer (of course, there's others not just here but she just likes to include herself only bc y not if ur rich and cool) swimming competitively was the joy of her life, the getaway from all the stress in life. entering aejung in a way was a new fresh start for her. 

airiharu, year 3, grade 9

airiharu had always known to have a short-temper and that she hasn't always been good at keeping calm about it. as well as, airiharu hasn't always been close to her family the past few years, but deep down inside everyone knows that she loves and protects them a lot. anyone who'd touch them would get a knock out from her. 

honestly, it had could've been avoided if the person didn't do what they did. airi, i have something for you // don't call me that if you don't know me like that, she rolled her eyes while not looking up from her phone. it had been during their lunch break and she was just relaxing with her leg propped up on the desk in the classroom. she threw the packaged noodle on the desk, airiharu peered at it, saki saki noodles, mmm - glad you're promoting my family's work of art. she sarcastically said. no, in fact i found something in it // what, noodles? /snorts & scoffs/ // lead // what do you mean lead, she sat up. looking at the girl straight in the eye. what i mean and ooohh - i can't wait for your parents company to fa-- within a second, airiharu grabbed the girl but her collar. don't you dare make some bull lie and try to defame us // check for the package yourself // look, hitomi, we would never, airiharu had reached her full potential anger and threw the girl on the ground by this time, students heard the commotion, hey guys! airiharu and hitomi are fighting! eventually airiharu was pulled off by her friends, hey airi, what's gotten into you // haru what happened. 

hitomi was right and airiharu checked it out with her parents. not getting answers from them -- she decided if it were true, she'd save her parents from defamation and keep hitomi's mouth shut. the girl had paid someone to "poison" but it wasn't really the heavy stuff besides laxatives. the girl was given laxatives a little too much for a good two weeks, it had caused the girl to almost be killed and stayed in the hospital for almost a month and a half. some accusations had led to airiharu trying to kill her but none of it was really confirmed. this was the beginning of her being sent to aejung for a new fresh start. 

of course, no one knows her secret except for jinye because she had seemed to trust jinye would never say a word to anyone. however, from time to time it goes around aejung her past being brought up.

mark lee, year 2 // i don't know, i heard from some random person that her nickname back in japan was kira after an incident with a student
"kira? like from the anime, boy you need to relax"
"i'm serious!"

yoo yeonjung, year 1 // there was a japanese transfer earlier this year, umm i heard she said something about airharu almost killing a student after a mishap with each other, but I wouldn't believe it - she's always busy with swim and parties, who has time to just go around killing others
"come to think of it, i haven't heard about that transfer, do you think airiharu had something to do with it?"
"no! look, she's like my role model, i'd hate to think anything of her like that."

kang seulgi, year 3 // kira means a god-like figure, killing evil for their sins, that's stupid, her? a god-like figure? in your dreams kiddo.
"i heard she had an intimate relationship with her teachers and her friends tried to expose her"
"she knows everything about everyone, who would try that card?"

but besides all the rumours and annoying kids, she tends to have her guard up in case anyone tries to expose her family. however, on the average day she just tends to breeze through the days carefree. 

NETFLIX & CHILL

love interest — i'm ok with my character being used as a love interest! (: 
backup 
 
personality 
background 
love story 
trivia + habits —

 
ending — you can leave it up to me if you'd like !
 
comments — ogvsvofvnsodn i'm SOSOSOSO sorry it took months forever to turn this in i just never knew if you were continuing plus school and all that shnazzy stuff T-T anyways i hope you enjoy her and omg idk if it's fitting to your standards or dramatic enough lmao ;-; i tried welp -- hope you like her !!
questions — n/a
scene reqs — add a lot pls, i need tem!
- her sister and her relation together getting worse, so her sister decides to anonymously leak her sister's secret about her and hitomi (ikdkdkd im sorry --)
- her going to a party and drinking, she get's really smashed and almost jailed for underaged drinking
- more to be added later ?? (: 
password — omgomgomg yesss???!?!?!?
 
 

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#1
hi blue !!! ooo, viet-japanese i dig
thank you so much for tran airiharu :-)
also!!! nana komatsu is bae ty for this !!!
while there were no mistakes, per say--
you didn't really expand into inner circle / golden circle
how is she affliated with inner circle? or rather,
how will she be affliated with the inner circle?

normally i write a short excerpt on your character--
but since the deadline is soon (also there's nothing about being
in the inner circle which is primarily what the story is about,,, lmao)
regardless of whether or not you will be chosen,
there will be a sort of chapter that will include your character so !!!

++ another thing (since im a lil bit protective over my smol child jinye)
jinye really,, wouldn't,, be friends with airiharu,, lMAO
apologies for not ,,, doing anything on my app yet but
you'll come to read that jinye looks down on people like airiharu HAHAHA
just giving you a headup that airiharu and jinye, should she be chosen :-),
will probably not be friends but rather jinye will look down on airiharu

thank you so much!!!