Song I Wrote: Lost

Felt inspired again, so I wrote another song! This time it's in English, so no translation. A song about losing yourself in a relationship and not knowing who you are or what to do when it ends. Tell me what you think!!!

Lost

Seems like just yesterday you threw away all of those years

Seems like they'll never fade; it's just the way I always feared

I gave my heart to you only to lose the part you kept

Like giving pearls to swine, foolishly I gave you myself

 

And there's no blue skies or sunshine or breezes left

There's just a distant land, my outstretched hand, drifting bereft

No matter where I  go, how far below or high above 

I'd still see your warm smile, those two big eyes and fall in love

 

Maybe I'm just a fool

Maybe I'm lost 

I keep on coming back to you

Maybe I'm lost

Maybe I'm just a fool

Maybe I'm lost

I keep on coming back to you

Maybe I'm lost

 

Ignored the hidden lies between the lines of your facade

Ignored the fading sound of common ground drifting away

I see a pattern now; when you're around I feel no shame 

But when all's said and done I'm left alone with me to blame

 

And there's no butterflies or rainbows or meadows left

There's only gray skies, watery eyes, proof of our death 

But wherever I go, so far below or high above

I still see your warm smile, those two big eyes and call it love

 

Maybe I'm just a fool

Maybe I'm lost

I keep on coming back to you

Maybe I'm lost

Maybe I'm just a fool

Maybe I'm lost

I keep on coming back to you

Maybe I'm lost

 

Maybe I'm just a fool

Lost

I keep on coming back to you

Lost

 

Maybe I'm just a fool

Lost

I keep on coming back to you

Lost

 

I'm so lost

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BangMyGuk #1
I think it's beautifully the emotions you put into it are really there. It made me tear up.
cSHINm
#2
I think it's absolutely brilliant. The play of words and all. Now it only needs a melody to go with it!