Chapter 20 part 1

A Twisted Fairytale

Hwamin stared agape at eomma.

"Did you just hit me?" Hwamin asked.

"What does it look like? I am sick and tired of your attitude!" Eomma tried to hit Hwamin again but she dodged it perfectly.

"What?! Are you disappointed because i'm not the perfect daughter you've always wanted?!" Hwamin shouted.

"I've always had a perfect daughter. Haneul is my perfect daughter. Then you came along and i thought you would be even better so i favoured you to her!" Eomma blurted out.

"How can you be so biased?!" Hwamin exploded.

"Even when you threw your temper as a kid, i thought you would grow out of it. But you're still the same! For once, can you be more like your eonnie?!"  Eomma frowned.

"Stop comparing us! She stole Baro oppa away from me!" Hwamin shouted.

"That's because you're a selfish brat!"

"A selfish brat?!"

"How dare you raise your voice at me!" A loud smack was heard as the cane hit Hwamin's thigh again. The door creaked and Haneul came in to see eomma trying to hit Hwamin.

"Eomma!" Haneul gasped and ran to her. "Why are you hitting Hwamin?" Haneul asked anxiously.

Eomma threw the cane on the floor. "Ask her!" She stormed away.

Hwamin glared at eomma as she left then stared at Haneul. "I don't need your help." She said and stormed away.

Haneul watched silently, feeling confused.

 

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Sooyoung nudged Haneul. "Are you okay?" She asked.

Haneul nodded. "I'm just confused."

"What happened?" Sooyoung frowned.

"Eomma has been scolding Hwamin a lot these few days." Haneul explained.

"She has?" Sooyoung raised her eyebrow and Haneul nodded.

"That's strange." Sooyoung shrugged "You'd better be careful."

"What do you mean?" Haneul frowned.

"Nothing, just be careful." Sooyoung ended the topic.

 

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Someone knocked on the door and Haneul promptly went to answer it.

"Let's go out." Baro smiled as the door opened.

"Out where? Hwamin's at home." Haneul frowned.

"Nevermind her. Don't you want to play with Byeol?" He asked cutely.

"Can i?" She asked.

"Of course! Let's go." He grabbed her hand and pulled her with him.

 

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"Where's Byeol?" Haneul asked as they neared a cafe.

"Wait here." Baro smiled and ran off.

After a moment, Byeol ran up to Haneul with a letter in it's collar.

Haneul smiled and picked it up. "What's this?" She took out the letter and read it.

~I've been wanting to ask you this for a long time now, will you accept my heart? I'll be waiting for you at the park nearby.~

Haneul blinked. "Byeol ah, is... is he confessing?"

Byeol looked at Haneul then turned away.

Haneul smiled and its fur. "Of course you wouldn't know."

 

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"I wonder if she'll come." Baro muttered to himself.

Suddenly, someone hugged him from the back.

Baro turned around to see Haneul smiling at him. "You came!" He smiled.

"Of course." Haneul laughed.

"Did you see the letter?" He asked.

Haneul nodded. "It was so obvious." She smiled. "But... how can you make use of Byeol like that? It's innocent!" She chided gently.

"Sorry, i won't do it again." Baro hugged Haneul. "So... i suppose you're my girlfriend now?" He smiled cheekily.

"I guess..." She replied, eyeing him warily.

"Then i suppose i can do this." He smirked and planted a quick, soft kiss on her lips.

Haneul was stunned for awhile, but soon returned the kiss.

"So what do you want to do now?" Baro asked as he pulled away from the kiss.

"I want to go to Lotte World! I've never been there. It seems fun."

"Sure, let's go!" They held hands and walked off.

 

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Just part 1 because the other chapter might be really long. :D

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SHINeeGirl40
#1
Chapter 12: can I curse? That Hwamin is really too much....
Hwarin
#2
Thanks a lot :)
Seoyunaria #3
Chapter 49: Wah !!! This story is so very good ! I enjoy reading this ^^
sungkyunnie
#4
I enjoyed reading this!!
iluvEXOforever #5
Chapter 48: so true, the end.. all fairytales end the same, twisted or not.. i wish i could live in a fairytale, because my life like hell right now..
iluvEXOforever #6
Chapter 41: hee^^ they're wearing hot pink^^
iluvEXOforever #7
Chapter 17: holy s**t my mom's name is byeol and you're starting to freak me out with your immensly scary deja vuing
iluvEXOforever #8
That's ma name... Haneul.. Except I'm PARK Haneul, not IM Hanuel.. oh well.. is this just a coincidence, because my little sis's name is Hamin, not Hwamin.. God, this is scary..
Luuvingmusic #9
Chapter 45: Omg so I'm so sorry I haven't commented. I sorta got busy with school ! :( I cant Belive it that she still doesn't remember! Keep writin please !