AinNadwah96 - Devil's Play
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Devil's Play
Reviewer
Eyelinerbaby
Genre
Horror, thriller
Status
Completed
Content Warning
Blood, death, spirit rituals
Characters
Kim Seoyeon (OC), BTS Jungkook, Jimin, V, iKON B.I, Bobby, Jinhwan
Total score
80/100
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Title [ 6/10 ]
To be honest, when I first read your title, my first thought was your story is about a girl bonded to a group of boys who are probably devil. I never think that this will turn out to be the devil game thing.
Description/Foreword [ 15/15 ]
Although it is short, I think it fits perfectly your story. It directly tells your reader what have they done and leads to consequences. Reader will be interested to read the story to find out the consequences.
Characterization [ 5/15 ]
I have to say, although the story line is well written, I cannot really see each of the character’s characteristics. They are all best friends, working together to end the game that they started before. They are all scared and frightened every time. Other than that, I think your characters are only there to move the plot but never feel alive.
Storyline/Plot & Flow [ 18/20 ]
This story gives me goose bumps through the whole story. Just imagine how Jinhwan is dead hanging when his girlfriend sees him, Dain die in front of Jimin. I like the way his friends find out ab
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