Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies
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Allegro: Young Blood and Electric Blue Skies
Reviewer
Eyelinerbaby
Genre
Romance, angst, family, friendship
Status
Completed
Content Warning
None
Characters
Seventeen's Wonwoo and Red Velvet's Seulgi
Overall Rating
✰✰✰✰ out of 5
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Title
The title sounds original and unique, but it is too long for me. It actually gave me a fantasy vibe.
Description/Foreword
Your description is beautiful and perfect- for Seulgi's part. In my opinion, you had revealed too much about Wonwoo. After reading the description section, I am still at lost. What are you trying to express about your two main characters? About grammar, see grammar section.
Characterization
Wonwoo is a-two-faced-person in my opinion during the first two chapters. After reading one more chapter, as your reader had point out for you, Wonwoo is like a lost child doing and looking for something in a wrong way. As his character develops, he began to be more mature. Still, I love the way you described every actions and thoughts of Wonwoo. The way he described Seulgi from his perspective is very detailed. In short, I totally like the way you portrayed each major and minor characters. Great job!
Storyline/Plot & Flow
I would like to describe your first chapter with one word, amazing! You did a good job in attracting
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