The Misunderstanding

Unplanned Journey...
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(Chen's POV)

"... joining us." Ms Jung gestured me to enter the classroom. "Do a self introduction."
The moment I stepped into the classroom, I could hear girls chattering about my looks. At the same time, I saw the shocked faces on Xiumin's and Luhan's. Haha! I didn't tell them anything. Their priceless faces.

"Annyeonghasaeyo. Hi everyone, nice to meet all of you. My name is Kim Jongdae, I prefer people calling me Chen and I'm Korean. I transferred from an international school and can speak simple chinese." I introduced myself and did a 90 degree bow.

Mr Song: "You can take the empty seat beside Lynn. She is that student at that corner beside the windows." Mummers of how lucky she was for me to sit beside her were heard.

I took a look at her. She looks some how familiar to me but I couldn't remember who she was. I took steps closer to the table. She was staring at me. I wonder why. 
As I pulled out the chair, I saw her bag. She was still staring at me. Am I not welcomed? She took away her bag reluctantly and hung it behind her chair.
Throughout the whole lesson, she gave me a cold shoulder. I didn't even attempt to talk to her. She might just kill me with her eyes.
After the lesson before break ends, girls started crowding my table wanting to know me. She was packing her stuff silently, with that poker face. I smiled at them. The next moment, she's gone. Xiumin and Luhan asked the girls to leave.

Luhan started the whining "Chen! How could you not tell us about transferring here!"
"Yea. KIM-JONG-DAE." Xiumin rubbed in.
"It was meant to be a surprise! Haha! Sorry guys!" I responded, painting on a guilt tripped face.
"Let's go meet up with the other guys." Luhan suggested.
"And I'll introduce you to our BFF." Xiumin added. 

After meeting the other guys that are from different classes as me and exchanging greetings, we headed towards the cafeteria. We collected our trays and Xiumin led us towards a long table. Two female schoolmates were sitting there, chatting. After Xiumin placed his tray on the table, he pulled me toward the girls.

"Boo! Let me introduce you to the final member of Exotic! He is the one I've told you about before. The one who couldn't attend high school together with us as his parents wanted to send him to an international school."Xiumin introduced, "Chen, this is Lynn she's our BFF!"
"Not mine, we're just friends." Kris commented indifferently while putting a mouthful of rice into his mouth.
"Yea. She's their BFF." Tao looked in the direction of YiXing, Luhan and Xiumin.

She forced a smile at me. Her facial expressions changed and it was a complete different look she had when she's chatting with her friend.
She ate her meal silently. Sometime in the middle of the meal, I asked the others, "Why is she like this? Does she not like me?"
"PMSing I guess." Kris replied. Luhan, Xiumin and YiXing shot him a glare.
"She's always like this when she's with people she's new with.When you see her other side, you'll realize how different she could be." Luhan answered, stole a glance at her, then unconsciously letting out a smile. Different? Why did these guys became friends with her? Oh my goodness.

"I'm going to my locker." she

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Lani_Definitely
#1
Chapter 10: I am liking this story so fat, I can't wait for the next update ! ♥
miyoonji #2
Chapter 7: Chapter 4: I think either narrated or POV is fine, but I think you should not repeat what you have narrated before too much because it will get boring. Like in chapter 4, half of the chapter is already in chapter 3. If you want to write the same scene in other's POV, don't repeat the conversation too much.
googletranslate #3
seems interesting! i'll read it now!
Memorize
#4
Chapter 7: Your story is kind of like a play and a fanfic?
When you want the characters to do an action, it's not like:
*bows 90 degrees*
You have to put it into sentence format:
I bow ninety degrees to the class.
And then when the characters are speaking, you don't put the format into a play too!
XM: *insert words*
Me: *insert words*
You have to put it into a sentence format also!
"Yeah, Kim Jongdae!" Xiumin spurts out.
"It was meant to be a surprise," I smirked.
And if you're going to continuously switch POVs, then it's better to write in third person.
julia_z #5
Chapter 6: Please update soon! I love it!!~ :D <3