Stranger

Unplanned Journey...
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"OMG!" the girls in the cafeteria gasped.

Krystal had just poured a bowl of hot chicken soup over Lynn's head. Lynn and Amber were having a meal during lunch break. Seeing a smirk on her face, Amber stood up immediately and stared at Krystal, wanting to stand up for Lynn. Feeling that a fight might break out among them, she pulled Amber back and told her to calm down.

"Want to hit me? Crawl over here then. Lo-sers!" Krystal snickered and turned away.

Holding her wrists, Lynn looked into Amber's eyes earnestly.

"Amber..." Lynn sighed "please... Don't get back at her for what she has done. I'm leaving for a sho-"

"BUT-"

"No buts. I'm going for a shower. Don't worry, I'm fine. I'll be back before lessons starts. Play with Xiumin or what not. Don't get into trouble because of me again. Okay?" "On a side note, don't you dare tell the boys anything. Promise me that."

Amber sighed in defeat. She could never understand why Lynn has to tolerate such humiliation and how she even managed to stay calm when Krystal did something that would totally set her bombs off if she was on the recieving end.

Lynn ran to her locker, embarassed as students who passed by her threw her looks and judged her. Lynn usually have a set of uniform in the locker as such events are common happenings in her daily school life. She intended to take a fresh shower since there is about an hour and 15 minutes before

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Guys... I'm having writer's block. Please have more patience yea? Kamsahamnida!

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Lani_Definitely
#1
Chapter 10: I am liking this story so fat, I can't wait for the next update ! ♥
miyoonji #2
Chapter 7: Chapter 4: I think either narrated or POV is fine, but I think you should not repeat what you have narrated before too much because it will get boring. Like in chapter 4, half of the chapter is already in chapter 3. If you want to write the same scene in other's POV, don't repeat the conversation too much.
googletranslate #3
seems interesting! i'll read it now!
Memorize
#4
Chapter 7: Your story is kind of like a play and a fanfic?
When you want the characters to do an action, it's not like:
*bows 90 degrees*
You have to put it into sentence format:
I bow ninety degrees to the class.
And then when the characters are speaking, you don't put the format into a play too!
XM: *insert words*
Me: *insert words*
You have to put it into a sentence format also!
"Yeah, Kim Jongdae!" Xiumin spurts out.
"It was meant to be a surprise," I smirked.
And if you're going to continuously switch POVs, then it's better to write in third person.
julia_z #5
Chapter 6: Please update soon! I love it!!~ :D <3