HELP!

Bare Lady
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Hey, I'm sorry for not updating anymore due to me trying to adapt with my new college (though I'm not sure if it is because we're only learning A level here then you'll choose your university after that). I'll continue to write after my first APR (which is like a first term exam in other schools, I don't know).

Due to my non-existence experience with English Literature, I had a hard time to catch up. So, if any kind souls here will help me, please do tell me how you analyse poem so easily, like please make it detail? I'm doing the Jennings poem for extra information. 

PM me!!

Your help will be appreciated so much! 

Yours sincerely, 

bunny-peach!

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caramelboba
#1
Chapter 7: Omg, I hope you will survive that! (sorry, can't be any help here, I can only analyse poems in my native language)
Hwaiting~!^^
caramelboba
#2
Chapter 6: Ah, don't worry! Tho I'm in no position to say anything as I'm a slow reader, it's okay to wait for the sake of quality. And I bet everyone here understands that you guys can't use all your time on the story. I enjoy this story and I can wait as long as it takes, being impatient leads nowhere~
And you're not weird, it's easier bringing emotion to writing when you actually feel something similar^^ Now, I understand why the feeling in this story is so strong.
caramelboba
#3
Chapter 4: HIP HIP HOORAY~ Gongrats^^

Wait, is Jongin the scary man?? or is there another flashback coming ahead? Was the girl his sister? Becky, who on earth? Please don't make me sense love triangle here o.o
Eh, no need to answer my questions, I'm sure I'll find out by just reading further! Got one more new chapter to read today^^
You went to SG! *gets too many memories* So off-topic, but I realised that I never actually told you how grateful I am with the style advice you gave me when I was going there. It was so easy packing my stuff and I think I managed to look pretty decent on my first date, so THANK YOU *u*
Now I'm off to read the next chap!
Im-Yeon #4
Chapter 6: Gee.... u worry too much. Don't worry, I'm not gonna unsubscribe. I don't think any of us will. I upvoted ages ago bcuz i think ur story is really good. I'm very choosy when it comes to upvoting so it really proves how i like ur story.U have a very unique plot here! I'm dying to know what happen. i tried imagining what will happen next but i really can't. Fightning!!
Kookgenius
#5
Chapter 3: Authornim !!! Love ur story omoooo thanks for suggesting it to me ohmy reallly kyaaaaaaaa ^^^^^^^
caramelboba
#6
Chapter 3: I've been anxious about getting enough time to finally read this chapter, took so long ;;
WOW! I just couldn't stop reading once I started, my brain was too slow to understand for my liking cause the text just got me carried away. (I hope I make any sense here...) Especially the scene about the night was amazing! I really like how you construct your chapters, they have nice styling details. And the English just gets me going 'OMG YES!' cause it's vivid and you're seriously improved, and your friend has done good job editing it too!
I enjoy this story rather much for a person who can't handle angsty stories o_o

Hope your exam month went well! And if you still want to share your ponders I'm all ears (or eyes in this case~)^^
Im-Yeon #7
Chapter 3: I really like your story and writing style. The plot is unique and I'm already dying for some kai moments. Plz plz plz updte soon. U hv an obsessed reader here
infinitelysoshi
#8
Chapter 2: Wait so sooyeon's dad really killed someone?? Or was it just a rumor or accusation?? If its the latter then thats just really sad:(
And get well soon!!
infinitelysoshi
#9
Chapter 1: Kim jongin you rude
caramelboba
#10
Chapter 2: I love how you lid out the scene in the beginning ><
And this chappie was so good~! It made me feel so pained, but it just tells it was well written^^
I fel sorry for you havnig to eat porridge, ewwww. Hope you're well or at least better already *u*
oh oh, do you mind telling me which kind of dance competition it was? (dancing is life)