Bare Lady

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"Bare Lady" 
A story about a lady living through the harsh society,
and meeting her true love.

 
The population of ageing citizens had raised significantly and the only way they could solve the problem is by forcing high school students to bear at least one child. 
Tiffany who had been surviving all the cruel years since young soon faced another challenge. A challenge she thought would be a no problem until she meets this young man. 
 
 
"I feel exposed. Like I'm ." - Sooyeon.
 
 
 

Foreword

EXCERPT

"Do you really hate me that much?" Her voice sounded strained as she look through her eyelashes.

He sighed, his fingers automatically ran through his blond hair, his eyes closed as he looked up to the starry night. "No." He curtly replied.

"I-It's fine to tell the truth... I mean, it's always been like this. No one will stay long with me... even my baby." Sooyeon finally let out a soft sob, her palms immediately clutched on her now, empty of life belly. "It's almost two years anyway... just endured for another year and I'll leave you alone."

 

 

 

 

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Dedicated to all readers who had taken tremendous interest on this story and also the passer-by. 

Copyright © bunny-peach 2015

This story is entirely work of fiction. The names, characters and incidents portrayed in it are the work of the author's imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events or localities is entirely coincidental. (Except the Mister named Kim Jongin, only name but no personalities). Do not try to plagiarize unless you wanted to be haunted at night.

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In need of a beta!!!

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caramelboba
#1
Chapter 7: Omg, I hope you will survive that! (sorry, can't be any help here, I can only analyse poems in my native language)
Hwaiting~!^^
caramelboba
#2
Chapter 6: Ah, don't worry! Tho I'm in no position to say anything as I'm a slow reader, it's okay to wait for the sake of quality. And I bet everyone here understands that you guys can't use all your time on the story. I enjoy this story and I can wait as long as it takes, being impatient leads nowhere~
And you're not weird, it's easier bringing emotion to writing when you actually feel something similar^^ Now, I understand why the feeling in this story is so strong.
caramelboba
#3
Chapter 4: HIP HIP HOORAY~ Gongrats^^

Wait, is Jongin the scary man?? or is there another flashback coming ahead? Was the girl his sister? Becky, who on earth? Please don't make me sense love triangle here o.o
Eh, no need to answer my questions, I'm sure I'll find out by just reading further! Got one more new chapter to read today^^
You went to SG! *gets too many memories* So off-topic, but I realised that I never actually told you how grateful I am with the style advice you gave me when I was going there. It was so easy packing my stuff and I think I managed to look pretty decent on my first date, so THANK YOU *u*
Now I'm off to read the next chap!
Im-Yeon #4
Chapter 6: Gee.... u worry too much. Don't worry, I'm not gonna unsubscribe. I don't think any of us will. I upvoted ages ago bcuz i think ur story is really good. I'm very choosy when it comes to upvoting so it really proves how i like ur story.U have a very unique plot here! I'm dying to know what happen. i tried imagining what will happen next but i really can't. Fightning!!
Kookgenius
#5
Chapter 3: Authornim !!! Love ur story omoooo thanks for suggesting it to me ohmy reallly kyaaaaaaaa ^^^^^^^
caramelboba
#6
Chapter 3: I've been anxious about getting enough time to finally read this chapter, took so long ;;
WOW! I just couldn't stop reading once I started, my brain was too slow to understand for my liking cause the text just got me carried away. (I hope I make any sense here...) Especially the scene about the night was amazing! I really like how you construct your chapters, they have nice styling details. And the English just gets me going 'OMG YES!' cause it's vivid and you're seriously improved, and your friend has done good job editing it too!
I enjoy this story rather much for a person who can't handle angsty stories o_o

Hope your exam month went well! And if you still want to share your ponders I'm all ears (or eyes in this case~)^^
Im-Yeon #7
Chapter 3: I really like your story and writing style. The plot is unique and I'm already dying for some kai moments. Plz plz plz updte soon. U hv an obsessed reader here
infinitelysoshi
#8
Chapter 2: Wait so sooyeon's dad really killed someone?? Or was it just a rumor or accusation?? If its the latter then thats just really sad:(
And get well soon!!
infinitelysoshi
#9
Chapter 1: Kim jongin you rude
caramelboba
#10
Chapter 2: I love how you lid out the scene in the beginning ><
And this chappie was so good~! It made me feel so pained, but it just tells it was well written^^
I fel sorry for you havnig to eat porridge, ewwww. Hope you're well or at least better already *u*
oh oh, do you mind telling me which kind of dance competition it was? (dancing is life)