I was lead by curiosity to your story. It's cute, funny and ingenious. How to create a story with two understanding levels? You perfectly know it. I suppose you made a story focused on Taeny. Some questions left unresolved although: Yuri's reactions about Taeny and if Tiffany was a client of Yuri's vet office, why Yuri didn't inform Taeyon Tiffany was back in their town? But whatever, this would have brought anger or explanations or made us looking down at Yuri. So you did well. It was cheesy and likeable.
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