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When Red Roses Bloom
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When the bell finally rings at 3:00 you feel a weight lifted off your shoulders, you love this feeling. Taekwoon is watching you from his motorcycle as you make your way to the bus stop. 
"Does he think sunglasses hide his glare? God, I hate that man." You say in a whisper.          
    You turn and see him sitting right next to you "Yah!! You scared me." You yell and hit his shoulder. "Damn, he's ripped." You think. 
"What do you want?" You almost shout at him but didn't mean too, he just makes you so angry. He looks at you for what feels like eternity it makes you squirm. 
"Meet me at the cafe at 5." He says. 
"Whoa he speaks." You think to yourself. 
You look at him in disgust "No." You simply say without second guessing yourself. You get up off the bench because you see your bus, but before you can get on he grabs your wrist and spins you around.
"Why? Why don't you like me? Did I do something?" He asks his voice straining a little.
You sigh,"No, you didn't do anything. I don't like your attitude. Plus you seem like a player and I know what it feels like to get played. So if you will excuse me I would like to get on my bus now." 

 

 

-----Sorry these chapters are so short X(------

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HomeHam #1
Chapter 2: I believe that zcrystalemerald is a bit wrong, I mean, the story is still building up. Its only the first chapter. I think your story is great so far choiminhee1103
choiminhee1103 #2
thank you, i appreciate you telling me :)
zcrystalemerald
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Chapter 2: The story is very fast-paced and does not draw you in. The character would not have explained her reason very easily. This is some criticism that I believe will help you its not meant to hurt you. The direction in which the story is heading in is interesting, I like the comparisons of Leo's hair and the title of the story. With more background information and details, the pace of the story. Include details about her friends and family. This will strengthen your story