I'll hold this stroy for a while and I'll be doing some changes... chap 1 will be edited a bit and a parallel story will be added. Also, I'll be deleting chap 2 for now...
Chapter 8: Aww I was enjoying reading it from the 3rd POV until it shifted back to Yoona's pov. Seeing Yoona in distress all because of Jessica.. I dunno.. Pair her with somebody else instead?It to know she's suffering like this. Anyways, thanks for the update author.
Chapter 7: It's great to read each character's POVs. Does this mean the rest of the chapters will follow suit or will there still be a 3rd POV? Also, mm so Yoona remembers everything now? LOL idek if she's thinking about Jessica during this chapter. Everything's so vague here...
Thank you so much for this update, author. It's alright, you have your priorities. :)
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