I'll Be Right Back

Description

Before Luhan went off somewhere, he'd always tell me these exact words: I'll be right back. It was like a game between the two of us. He'd say the words and i'd wait, and like he said, he'd always come right back to me. But this time I wasn't so sure.

Foreword

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A short, one shot of Minseok foreshadowing Luhans departure.

Pairings are of course, Xiuhan

Warning: Angst

Don't like, don't read.

Hope you enjoy~

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Wildbean #1
Chapter 1: I'm crying and I know this might sound so cheesy but luhan did come back to korea hopefully to see his baozi

I'M SOBBING
Xiaomiki #2
We all know he's never gonna be back ;-;. Xiuhan feels are real.
darknesse13 #3
Chapter 1: This was really a really good fic, I liked the idea and the little bit of set up you did for the story. As for critiques; I think that you could have more lead into new information and scenes, and have a clearer introduction hinting at most if not all of the ideas that were going to be explored in the plot. Other than critiquing I loved this. I loved the theme and the way you built their relationship and Luhan leaving exo. I loved the way you paced the text and the ideas, the dramatic tension was great. The ending is such a cliffhanger I'm sitting here thinking of all the things that could come after that moment. All I have left to say is that I'm thirsty for a sequel or another chapter or any sort of closure (my fangirl heart can't take it). Keep up the good work and have a nice day~
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