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The lantern's blood will shine in the darkest night.   navigation home reviews link three plotlines link one link four application link two layout credit seo yu rae   PLOTLINE. Leader, main vocalist
FACE CLAIM. jiji
backup FACE CLAIM. park seul
LOVE INTEREST. song mi no
applicant. unknown-username
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. pending

I like her personality, but its a bit contradicting. It says that she is a leader, aka mother of the group, but she's a cry baby? I would suggest that she takes the maknae of the group instead of te leader, because as a leader, she doesn't have to be motherly, but she has to lead well. Also she seems friendly and nice, but the controlling side of her tips me off a bit. She can't be friednly and nice but controlling, because those personality traits clash.

Overall, I like her, she's adorable, but I'd rather have her as one of the maknae's. But if you don't like that, then, if it's alright, please change her personality a bit. .

yong gi ah   PLOTLINE. main rapper, dancer
FACE CLAIM. park sora
backup FACE CLAIM. lee dasom
LOVE INTEREST. huang zitao
applicant. hyo-jin
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. accepted

Gia's personality is quite realistic and thats what I like about her. But her face claim shows the opposite, Lee Dasom doesn't really look innocent- she looks more chic and rebelious, nothing your personality says about her. If it's alright, can you maybe change her face claim, or I can just use Park Sora.

And OMG, you are so evil. I'm definately going to have at least two of your suggested scenes, if you get chosen.

I actually, want to put Gia's brother as one of the male members of evermore, if thats alirght with you, then can you maybe make another application for him?

song min young   PLOTLINE. lead rapper, dancer
FACE CLAIM. do hwe ji
backup FACE CLAIM. name here
LOVE INTEREST. xi lu han
applicant. minnsong
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. accepted

Min young has a maknae charm to her, and I like that. She will really fit in the maknae line. Her personality is realistic, which is good.

However, if she's shy, woulodn't she be shy to express her feelings to other people.? unless, she's expressing gratitude to her fellow members. Also because Lu Han is kinda of a former member of EXO, do you want to use your back up. Or do you want to create a side drama because he's out and blah blah?

I can already imagine Min Young in the group! I hope she gets chosen, good luck! .

park hee jun   PLOTLINE. main vocalist, dancer
FACE CLAIM. park jae hyun
backup FACE CLAIM. name here
LOVE INTEREST. everlasting member
applicant. paula1988
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. accepted

Wheezes. Thank you so much for having your love interest as an Everlasting member. It really gave me great ideas for potential love triangles and what not. Although, I have to check with other applicants if they will allow me to pair him up with them

I like his personality, but its abit average, though I guess it's good to have an average personality right? xD

Anyways, I hope you get chosen and good luck to you !.

evelyn wasley jang   PLOTLINE. main dancer, vocalist
FACE CLAIM. lala
backup FACE CLAIM. name here
LOVE INTEREST. lee hong bin
applicant. weirdome
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. accepted

Such quantity, much quality. Haha, I really like how you formatted your application. I really enjoyed reading your application, it was sooo good!

Her personality is by far the best I've seen, and I'm really hoping she gets accepted. I like the way you explained her character traits in further detail and I will really help me if I write about her in the story.

yoo hye rin   PLOTLINE. leader, main vocalist
FACE CLAIM. byeon seo eun
backup FACE CLAIM. name here
LOVE INTEREST. byun baek hyun
applicant. exotic-sone
date submitted. mm/dd/yyyy
status. accepted

So much to read. But your lucky it had great quality. I honestly enjoyed reading it, all the details to explain her character traits is ace. I also liked the way you formatted your application and it made it easier for me to read.

She seems very realistic and interesting due to her insecurities and her past career as a model.

But you forgot to add friends and/or family. So can you pleasecomplete that? Anyways, I hope she gets chosen as one of the members!.

yoo cho ah   PLOTLINE. leader, main vocalist
FACE CLAIM. choi min hwa
backup FACE CLAIM. kim soo yeon
LOVE INTEREST. n/a
applicant. leixlay
date submitted. 04/22/2015
status. accepted

This is probably the first application that had good quality and not so much quantity. Honestly, her introverted yet determined personality reminds me of myself, and I love that about her. It's like her whole personality was based off a real person (which she probably is). Are you sure this is the first appliaction you've done? geez, dude, ythat's too good to be true. JK.

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nephesh
#1
Ah, so this is continued? ^^
Myungin
#2
ngg author-nim will this fic continue?
leixlay
#3
Chapter 29: I'm going back to read the chapters and man, my character is scary. o.o LOL
sitiaisyah93
#4
Chapter 11: Lol. Aysa's like Chanyeol? Haha XD
sitiaisyah93
#5
Chapter 32: Finally read everything. Phew! -wipes sweat-
I absolutely love all these members! My faves are Eve, Kairi and Blaize haha XD (not being biased, don't worry ><)
Congrats to Eve and all the other members!
And omffo 3 members left XD
Can't wait to see them soon!
leixlay
#6
Chapter 32: YAAAAS ~~ 3 more members !! (/0.0\) Congratulations to Eve ~ & all members ! ^~^*
Lee_Kairi
#7
Chapter 32: Where congrats to eve~ OuO

XDD THE COMMENTS SERIOUSLY
I DIE
_hooray
#8
Chapter 32: NGAWWW QAQ THEY ALL LOOKS CUTE LIKE ASJDKASD a whole big fluffy family-
congrats to eve!!
romeo and adam tho hahahahaha cx it'll be interesting if there is adam and romeo for real haha
ygsmjypfam
#9
Chapter 32: Congrats, Eve! Such a pretty girl :3
Yehet!!!! <3
Myungin
#10
Chapter 32: congrats to evelyn!
whoa, she does look... sultry there xD captivating stare.