(break) now to the prince

late like thunder

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jongdae races through the heavens, dodging neatly between clouds and other spirits as he spurs his lightning bolts further onwards. he much prefers working between the clouds as opposed to raining lightning down on the earth below. he doesn't like the damage his lightning causes to those living far below but he continues as he was created to. 

 

as the lightning prince, much of his time is spent ferrying his lightning down to the ground. he fingers the slim silver circlet resting on his head absently. it was well known that lightning was the hardest to control as well as being incredibly dangerous. most stayed well clear away from him, perhaps fearing he'd turn out like the previous lightning prince who'd almost destroyed the world in a fit of rage. only the bravest spirits dared 'consort' with him, as they so eloquently put it, but most times jongdae would find himself alone with his trusty staff, playing with his precious lightning bolts.

 

he sighs, sending another bolt down to earth with a flick of his finger. no use dwelling on it.

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short passage this time

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catinabamboohat
so so so sorry but i've hit major writer's block with this fic. i really can't say when i'll update this but i really do want to finish this :p

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Arashika #1
Chapter 7: I'm sorry I was going to give a serious comment but douchecanoe
Not really sorry indeed don't be sorry I can't stop laughing give me a moment to get back to semi-seriousness before I give you a proper comment

Ok, I'm calm. Kind of. Douchecanoe. Crap. Brb.

I need to stop.

Ok. I'm really enjoying this story so far! I love the way you've characterized everyone, the Krisoo interaction at the beginning was adorable. I'm currently in love with Yixing and Luhan and Minseok oh my god I can't deal with this this was so refreshing though after all the pining from Kyungsoo :(

It is really sad that Kyungsoo is always left to chase after Jongdae, always just a few steps behind, always wanting to meet him but never having the chance. I do wonder though, how come he wants to know Jongdae at all? Why is it he seems to love Jongdae when they've never met? How did they even become these elemental spirits in the first place? How come Kyungsoo can't meet Jongdae when they're not working as spirits, since he was able to meet Sehun and Baekhyun without some elemental force causing the meeting? I'm curious why it is that they're so segregated when it seems like the spirits can meet outside of their element.

I'm also very curious what Jongin's element is. I really wonder what's up with him, that he's trying to keep Jongdae away from Kyungsoo too. What's he up to? Hmm...

This story is amazing! I'm really enjoying the way it's written, and the way scenes are split. Personally, I wouldn't make every scene change into a separate chapter, but that's my personal style and this works just fine as well. I'm so curious as to what's going to happen next, and I can't wait to find out :D

Thanks for sharing this story with us! Take your time in writing, I hope that the story will be finished in future but don't feel pressured, do it at your own pace :D

Great job, keep writing~
the_rising_wolves
#2
Chapter 7: in love with this fanfic tbh 10/10
arandomperson #3
What is kaikai gonna do
Heavenlee
#4
I can't wait for more! This is so good! Will they ever talk to each other face-to-face... And Jongin, he seems deviou!
chizu_ya #5
Chapter 6: Why kai tell jongdae that kyungsoo is dangerous? Can't wait to find out,,,
Cause_life_told_me #6
Chapter 3: This story is so cool!!! I can't wait to see what happens, EEEEEE let it begin!!! xD
thosecookies
#7
subscribed! bcoz it looks great! :D