late like thunder

Description

jongdae flashes down to earth in an instant, white static flickering around his shiny black boots. count to three and he's already gone, off to his next destination.

Foreword

"you're thunder," the puddle at his feet tells him. "you can never meet him, you may only follow in his footsteps."

 

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hello everyone!

this is chensoo + mama!au-ish + some ot12 shenanigans + lapslock

i originally started writing this some time back for this chenchen pairing writing competition but i never finished it in time.

so, i'm splitting this piece into chunks, some chunks will be larger and some chunks will be quite small, but i think that works the best for this particular fic. updates may be staggered bc i haven't finished writing it yet

i really hope you all enjoy!

 

p.s. this had a prompt: 

"You are the person I'll never stop looking for in a crowded place." -wtm

 

Author's Thoughts
catinabamboohat
so so so sorry but i've hit major writer's block with this fic. i really can't say when i'll update this but i really do want to finish this :p
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Arashika #1
Chapter 7: I'm sorry I was going to give a serious comment but douchecanoe
Not really sorry indeed don't be sorry I can't stop laughing give me a moment to get back to semi-seriousness before I give you a proper comment

Ok, I'm calm. Kind of. Douchecanoe. Crap. Brb.

I need to stop.

Ok. I'm really enjoying this story so far! I love the way you've characterized everyone, the Krisoo interaction at the beginning was adorable. I'm currently in love with Yixing and Luhan and Minseok oh my god I can't deal with this this was so refreshing though after all the pining from Kyungsoo :(

It is really sad that Kyungsoo is always left to chase after Jongdae, always just a few steps behind, always wanting to meet him but never having the chance. I do wonder though, how come he wants to know Jongdae at all? Why is it he seems to love Jongdae when they've never met? How did they even become these elemental spirits in the first place? How come Kyungsoo can't meet Jongdae when they're not working as spirits, since he was able to meet Sehun and Baekhyun without some elemental force causing the meeting? I'm curious why it is that they're so segregated when it seems like the spirits can meet outside of their element.

I'm also very curious what Jongin's element is. I really wonder what's up with him, that he's trying to keep Jongdae away from Kyungsoo too. What's he up to? Hmm...

This story is amazing! I'm really enjoying the way it's written, and the way scenes are split. Personally, I wouldn't make every scene change into a separate chapter, but that's my personal style and this works just fine as well. I'm so curious as to what's going to happen next, and I can't wait to find out :D

Thanks for sharing this story with us! Take your time in writing, I hope that the story will be finished in future but don't feel pressured, do it at your own pace :D

Great job, keep writing~
the_rising_wolves #2
Chapter 7: in love with this fanfic tbh 10/10
arandomperson #3
What is kaikai gonna do
Heavenlee #4
I can't wait for more! This is so good! Will they ever talk to each other face-to-face... And Jongin, he seems deviou!
chizu_ya #5
Chapter 6: Why kai tell jongdae that kyungsoo is dangerous? Can't wait to find out,,,
Cause_life_told_me #6
Chapter 3: This story is so cool!!! I can't wait to see what happens, EEEEEE let it begin!!! xD
thosecookies #7
subscribed! bcoz it looks great! :D
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