Author: QueenOfCold

Story Title : Ardent

Summary: What happens when the abnormal happens ?
"the abnormal doesn't exist"
Something you've never experienced before
but you've experinced " everything"
Will you crumble under pressure?
but, you never crumbled under pressure before.
Will you do it ?
Or
Will you not?
¤ let me reveal all of the wonders of the universe and beyond ¤

Genre/s: Romance, Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Mystery,

Characters: Main characters :
Jung Mirae(OC), Jungkook, Taehyung (V)
Supporting charecters: Jimin, Jongup, Daehyun, Youngjae, Himchan, Jin

Notes: None.

 Reviewer: violetmoons

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Okay, let's go!

Title : 5/5

Simple, interesting. And you also put the definition of the word in the description. Simply, 5 out of 5!

Graphics (Poster + Background) : 4/5

There's no background (I suggest you put a simple one, at least!) yet the poster is eye catching. The colors go well together and since it's a dark-type of fanfiction it goes well with the theme of the story. I like how they put the sort of "supporting characters" in the bottom and the quote was also a nice touch.

However, you should maybe try resizing it so the reader can see the entire poster in one look. It's pretty big and I had to scroll down to see the rest of the poster.  (Maybe it's just my computer?)

Description and Foreword : 7/10

The foreword is pretty long but that's okay because this way you can give an insight to your story. Putting a small snippet of your story in is also good because that way the reader can see your writing style and kind of get an idea about the story.

The only thing I didn't like was that you didn't put small descriptions of the characters. I was a little confused as to who each character was. So yeah a description of the characters isn't necessary, but it is very appreciated.

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