Author (+Link): Xiuminbaozi99
Story Title (+Link): It's Your Fault For Getting Adopted!
Summary: Mi-hyun's peaceful life was destroyed when a boy named Luhan became part of her family.
Genre/s: RomCom
Characters: Mi-hyun (OC), Luhan, Sehun, Exo members
Notes: Thanks in advance :D
BTW it would be great if you can focus on Luhan and Mi-hyun relationship and tell me about the development in the review :D
Reviewer: violetmoons

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Title : 5/5
Pretty creative and very fascinating! 

Graphics (Poster + Background) : 3/5
Though the poster is very adorable and appealing to the eye, I think you can do something more eye catching (I saw your posters! They are amazing!)

Description and Foreword : 8/10
Description does not give away the entire story like most people do nowadays. It's short and goes straight to the point. Be a bit more descriptive on the characters, though. Like, their ages, maybe something to remember them by like, "Oh yeah Luhan! He likes playing videogames" Things like hobbies or goals in life, or anything of the like.
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Creativity and Originality : 4.5/5
I've never seen a plot quite like yours, actually. But I feel like some of the events were clichéd. 

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