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Author: Betxso

Story Title: The Lost Snow White

Summary: One day, it was a normal day until Shin Jinae dissappeared. Some were happy, some not. Her father, Shin Hyunseung called some detectives to find her. What he didn't know, is that one of them had a deep connection with his daughter.

Genre/s: Romance, Angst, Fantasy, Mystery

Main Characters: Shin Jinae, Kim Taehyung, Shin Minyeong
Supporting Characters: Jung Hoseok, Shin Hyunseung

Notes: None.

Reviewer: violetmoons

 

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Title : 5/5

Pretty self descriptive and has to do with the story.

 

Graphics (Poster + Background) : 5/5

The poster is beautiful. The colors match well. The snow falling as the background is very cute. And the quotes on the poster? Truly fantastic!

 

Description and Foreword : 9/10

The description itself is vague which is great because that way the readers will be more intrigued. But you thought of those who do not like vague descriptions, so you used the foreword to describe the plot a little more. And even then, you didn't give away too much.

I like how you put quotes at the bottom, too.

 

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Creativity and Originality : 4/5

I like the fact that it's just Snow White mixed with Sleeping Beauty mixed with Cinderella? It's creative and I like it. But princess stories and/or remakes are pretty common in AFF, and in the world in general, you know? So, unfortunately, I can't give you a 5.

 

Plot : 19/20

The plot is pretty interesting. As I said, it's not the most original one

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valyria
#1
Applied! Waiting for your reply!
blackswanads
#2
Hi! Wanna be affies? :)
Exoweareone_1012 #3
Can u explain me more ?
ChubbabyPuff
#4
I've applied~~ thank you..
kpop_is_my_life
#5
Thank you, the poster is great ((: but i have some questions, do i have to pay karma points? and how?
Yuki98
#6
Chapter 37: Hye~ I'm sorry.. can you make a redo.. just a bit redo... can you change Ravi to Hyuk??? I like the poster so much. Thank you for making it. But can you change Ravi to Hyuk ???
sonevipsoshibang #7
Requested!! But can i ask something? How do i pay karma points??
YoloZelo
#8
Chapter 36: About my Poster can you redo it... i don't like the Oc and the characters picture and colour its too blur , I can't read the title without my glasses on ( no offence tho) and I will pay you double Karma points.
weirdo_scene93
#9
Chapter 35: To designer Jia (Alice)
Thanks for the poster and background. You might have heard it before and I will say it again, Love Love love the poster and it's okay to take your time doin it. I understand your situation.
Not sure how to say it but, hwaiting. Stay strong and seriously love the poster, I just can't express it fully.
anyway, good luck to your studies again. hwaiting and thanks for the poster and background.
weirdo_scene93
#10
Chapter 33: Thank you, Rin. it's wonderful, beautiful and I'm speechless.
I really really really really love it so much.
I will pick it up at night, currently using phone.
Thanks again. I love it so much.
Exceed Expectation!!!!!! Thumbs up!!!