Anaemia

Description

Luhan was a playboy.
A married playboy.
Kyungmi was sick and her baby's birth was unsure to happen.
Mentally and Physically ill wasn't healthy for the baby.
She was hurt.
Seeing her husband with a girl all the time.
But what were the consequences when Luhan finds out that Kyungmi was diagnosed with anaemia?

There are two types of pains.
One that hurts you and the other that changes you.

Foreword

Anaemia is a sickness where a person lacks
red blood cells which causes extreme fatigueness
and many more 

Story entered Solistice Writing Contest

Prompt: ( 19 ) There are two types of pains.
One that hurts you and the other that changes you.

 

Graphics by: Akanex [district one poster shop]

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Wallyyy #1
Chapter 1: I thought this story flow was quite good in general, showing the way the characters change in their thoughts and actions! But it would be better if you expanded more on the feelings portion >.< I think it would make the authors 'feel' more if you put in more description of their feelings. But it is also nice to read that Luhan changed in the end since he's my bias heheheh :D :D But good job though! I wish you all the best for your competition!
WinterHarmony #2
Chapter 1: This was a nice and easy read. It's been a while since I read a oneshot, and this one touched me. For a slight second, I had to really jog my memory to remember what Anaemia was. When I finally remembered, I was able to understand its importance to this oneshot. Just a suggestion, for those who aren't exposed to learning these medical-like terms, you might want to include in your forward or description what Anaemia is. If you don't want to, that's fine too. Great job though, really & good luck with the Solstice Contest : )
avisdawn #3
Chapter 1: Definitel, the last part is funny ^^
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