papeterie says : 
well, this is my character isn't she gorgeous ? /shot.  anyway, my app isn't finished yet, but will be out soon and will be hyperlinked to my character's name above as well as in the cheatsheet section as one of the examples so, keep an eye and go check it out when ready...if you want? hehe! anyway, i look forward to reviewing your apps...oh, and feel free to call me sienna, sena or whatever ;) 

argent- says :
yes, this is my character and just to note out the fact that during their debut, she'll still have dark hair. I wanted to choose idols who aren't that well known just yet and I believe that zn from laboum is the one for me <3 
my app is out now so feel free to check it out when you can, sorry for any grammatical errors or mistakes.
I wanted to release it ASAP for you lovelys, good luck and can't wait to be reviewing them very soon! 

papeterie says : 
hey,dee and thanks for being the first applicant–that was quick! we didn't expect that to happen so quickly! anyway, on to the review! first of all, your faceclaim seems to be quite wrong since in the cheatsheet, we mentioned that faceclaims should be idols only so, please change that? i do like the amount of detail you've put in as well as some of the customising you've done! and oh my gosh, nahyeol loves rilakkuma...sarang just so happen to love rilakkuma as well /shot. i love scrolling through the trivia section–i find your character to be quite adorable ^^ 
     by the way, i just can't help, but notice the 'love rival' thing–i love a good drama; it's like an episode of corrie, eastenders,or something...well, that's what my friends would say, aha! aside from that, when you mentioned taeyeon, you written about your character going to kai and chanyeol, and it seems as though you consider them to be friends? if so, i suggest you explain nahyeol's relationship with them a little more?
     as well as that, some parts of your app don't make any sense such as the scandals section where you mention an 'aina' instead of a 'nahyeol' and 'fairytale' instead of 'hera' so, can you please alter that slightly? please go through and read your app to see what we mean like ,for example: your character's name's considered to be kang nahyeol however, she's born from a japanese father so, that wouldn't really be her birth name so, wouldn't her character's name be kazama miwa instead for nahyeol's a korean name as well as the 'kang'? in addition, a sub-dancer's role would be less significant than a lead or main dancer so, snsd's yuri being your dance claim doesn't fit for she's a lead dancer, but snsd members such as taeyeon would be considered to fit the role of a sub-dancer.
      i think that's all i have to say, really; just fix those errors and you're gladly accepted! thanks for applying and good luck, dee!

p.s i hope i didn't upset or offend you...i feel so mean /crawls under a blanket, wrapping around myself tightly. sowwie if i did though; i didn't mean to...

(updated!) thanks for fixing your mistakes; you're now accepted!

papeterie says :
'ello viv, and thanks for applying! sohee's just precious like asdfghjkl <3 i see you applied for a smrookie–i bet bree's loving you down right now, haha ;) and did i see an ouran highschool host club gif with haruhi and hikaru? gah, i ship them so much; i loved that scene. /coughs. okay, enough of the fangirling, hehe ^^
    in your app, i don't really see anything big and wrong with it; i actually quite enjoyed reading through it. i see another adorable character in our midst, haha. however, i would suggest to you to add more detail with your solo activity as in what kind of food cf your character had done, when she done it and all. as well as that, maybe explain the kind of aegyo she unconsciously does when she eats and such in some parts of your trivia? 
        yeji and johnny seem like such a sweet and innocent couple...as well as dorky...let me join in your harry potter and star wars marathons /slapped. by the way, i love 'what about you' by laboum–good choice! overall though, despite the little and minor errors in your app, you're still accepted–just make sure to add more detail for aubrey and i to understand and know your character a little better! ^^ again, thanks for applying!

p.s this is more of aubrey's suggestion, but overall, it is your decision in the end. she loves sohee very, very much and she appreciates the fact that you have applied in so much detail and care. she is touched you chose to read her brownie points sheet as well, but what she's suggesting that if you could possibly use your back-up fc hayoung instead of sohee, not that sohee is bad or anything–she feels both can be suitable for many different concepts ,and be a wonderful addition to the group. it's just that she'd like hayoung because she feels that hayoung suits the group's "look and image" more, but it's completely your choice and she'll respect what you choose and she wishes you a warm good luck!
 

argent- says :
hi there vivi! it is such a lovely pleasure to be reviewing your app, it was detailed and enjoyable to be looking through. me and sienna are very impressed and I really liked the fact that you had chosen to be 92'liner, since we've had young applicants so far. it's good to see a range of ages, I really love how you set out the sections and I believe she'll be a great addition to the group especially in variety shows! she sounds like such a fascinating character who can add good/bad drama in the group which is what we're looking for! I could really imagine a cute and close relationship between allison and yoonjo because they're both sociable and they'd be really loud and funny in group promotions and when they hang out too.
     her flaws are fine and explained very well, the traits are balanced so there's no problems there. her life in general and family seems realistic and reasonable to me, I'm glad to see that she signed up for things too. for her scandals, I feel like giving her a hug, is that alright? /shot, it's good to see the applicants noticing that scandals bring negativity therefore it brings a balance with fans and antis. everything looks great reading through downwards and I love her trivia section, yay SNS RULES!
    finally the love section ( god I am so sorry for rambling on, it's something which I can't help doing, forgive me ;; ) I love their relationship so much, baekhyun and yoonjo le cri es. thanks for adding in baekyeon's supposed breakup date! their history though le s0bs. I really love how they act around one another, I SHIP! - something I would ask of you if you don't mind is i noticed you didn't have anything for others' section, mind putting taeyeon? because i'd like to get the feel of her character whether she's y or actually kind and accepting. but overall trés fantastique! we see no problems or serious issues in your application so well done for that, you're accepted!

31 / 01 / 15 ( update )
thanks for fixing the small suggestion, love the title for taeng's persona lols.   

argent- says :
hello mari! thanks for applying and like any apps which I read, it's a pleasure looking through. so I'm going to start off with the age, I'm very glad to have another older member applicant, especially for the leader position but I'm a bit confused because it says that she's a 92'liner and then in the background it's 1993, mind fixing that small thing for me? <3 but I'm glad to see that the age was thought out well with position! I love how she's the one who firstly approaches and that she's the type who gets misunderstood, it's fascinating to have those types of characters.
     I love how she's a chinese member and a leader too, it reminds me of victoria of f(x), I could imagine seyeon being the leader who cheers the members on and gets them through hard times. It's really interesting to see her decisions, it shows that life isn't always your oyster. and oh wow, I really love her friends' plan, my friends would do the same with me if I was ever offered a possible music career so well done for the eccentric scouting story so far. everything seems fine ongoing.
     for solo activities mind adding which various shows they exactly were? oh and I'd love to visit her family ( esp mom. c; /shot ). I'm glad to see a trainee rival instead too, adding fuel to the fire huheu. d'aww such a shame taemin's banana milk though-/killed. everything looks great within the trivia section to me, caring leader s0bs. she has such healthy height and weight as well which is wonderful, xo. she'll be a great addition to the group especially in chinese variety shows because it means then that there's a large fanbase!
      now for the love interest, I love myungsoo! d'aww it's good to see infinite members, these two are misunderstood but very lovely characters deep inside, I'll ship them! their history and personality with one another is so cute, I wish I had it with my boy-friend ( oh wait i don't have any because I'm in an all girls school /killed. ) beautifully explained though!
    but overall I love the app, it was detailed and I love the decoration ( gifs are bae ), I also love the suggestions of scenes and pft, first language? bae you're fine! since you have not too many mistakes, but tiny fixes you're accepted! well done and sorry for my rambling, just fix those little errors please. thank you! <3

01 / 02 / 15 ( update )
thanks for fixing the small errors, awesome mc choices!.   

papeterie says :
hey, marin and thanks for applying! marin's such a nice and pretty name, hehe! anyway, let's start...
   i was wondering whether someone was going to apply with nana as their faceclaim, and looks like you did–nana's so gorgeous that i can't even; she's basically a goddess! another thing i'd like to say in aubrey's behalf is how happy she is by including her character into your app as well as having lee taeyong as love interest, and i've got to say that julianne and taeyong's relationship's adorable and 'taelie' is such a cute otp name! also, taeyong seems to be quite a gentleman; it's nice seeing him treat your character really well. from his personality section though, you didn't really state negative and neutral traits so, could you please add that in and such? thanks! everything else from your app seems alright and fine though–loving the amount of detail you've put in! with the talent twins part of the app, you didn't really have to add links, but that was very much appreciated! again, we have another character that's 'different' which makes your app refreshing and enjoyable for me to read ^^ love the persona by the way ;) amused me so much with 'lia, hera's glamorous kkap queen'! anyway, thanks again for applying and just make sure to fix taeyong's bit in the app and you're accepted!

(updated!) you're now accepted! thanks for fixing your app!

papeterie says :
hello, yui and thanks for applying! and about the ceo thing, yes, we're aware that the ceo of sm's kim youngmin however, in our fic, we decided of lee sooman coming back into sm entertainment and taking back his former position of being the ceo of sm; i hope this cleared up any confusion ^^ and you're right, kim youngmin's a fugly zombie.
   on to your app, thanks for the amount of detail you've put in and some of the customising you've done! your trivia section was especially fun for me to read–photobombing as a hobby, having a fear of butterflies–I CAN RELATE!! FINALLY, A CHARACTER THAT CAN RELATE TO ME.../COUGHS. i meant sarang /shot. if your character was chosen, you'll basically sarang and joohee fight over the title of chanyeol's biggest fan–that'd be fun, hehe ^^ joohee seems to be quite a fun and interesting character to be around!
    everything on your app seems all well and good however, you didn't include how joohee got into sm so, can you please add that in? as well as that, can you explain to me about the boarding school business for wouldn't it be hard for your character to reach the sm building to train? usually, trainees live in dorms which the company provides and tend to attend public/private schools close to the building for they've got to train for a certain amount of hours and all. 
    joohee and jungkookie–their relationship's just <3 childhood friends almost always gets my heart melting...and joohee ing the other members and their love interest is a fantastic scene request; that'd be really funny! 
            i guess that's all i've got to say before i go into fangirl-mode, hehe. again, thank chu for applying! make sure to fix those minor things pointed out and you're accepted! it was a pleasure going through your app!

(updated!) you're now accepted! thanks for fixing those minor errors!

argent- says :
hi alex! so to start off with this review, a huge thanks for applying and I have to say, when I had read this alongside sienna, we are very impressed with the detail and jaein's character overall. we believe that she'll be a great leader for HERA. it's good to have the age appropriately chosen which you have done, and can I just thank you for being a member which has limited language abilities, i really like seeing that especially when it comes to the future years for this girlgroup. le cri es, she's going to be such a loving umma in the group, i love leaders who are motherly and mature to handle tough situations, reminds me of leader vic. <3
     it's nice to have a character like jaein because she's someone who can knock some sense back into members, i especially love her flaws, she's a strong character to hide her feelings. i just want to give her a hug myself, so great job with personality as well as background, once again showing that life isn't perfect and she must've had a hard time, she reminds me of a modern version of mulan or elsa, she's like a protector which is a great trait when it comes to leadership. her trainee story looks great too having an interest within poetry and missed opportunities passing by, the relationship between her and her sister is so adorable, i like encouragement and how her audition went, it's good to see development within her trainee time too! her talent section and ongoing is good, and sorry about that, yes lead dancer is included too but you got the claims right anyways. i can't really see any problems with your app so great job! love her style by the way and can i just say I LOVE BIG HERO 6 SO MUCH AND I LOVE BAYMAX, BE MY BAE NNGGGH. <3 /shot.
     it's good to see that you included allergies as well, and finally for the love interest. gaaah chanyeorr, sienna lurbs him as well, oho - fangirls in da house. /kicked. i love how both of them are rappers, the two could compose together and get along very well! chanyeol is such a dork ( but in a good way of course ), i'll be shipping heart heart. their history is so adorable too and the only thing I'd ask as a suggestion is if you can write down the troubles in which they face, like contacting, a new love rival etc but overall it's wonderfully fine. and don't be sorry, I love a lot, details make me smile winkeu. /kicked. anyways great job and other than that suggestion, your app overall was great and there were no big errors to be noticed so you're accepted! <3       

argent- says :
hai min~ it's good to be reviewing and thanks for applying - it's good to have another older character applicant come into the scene. i'm glad that the age is appropriately chosen, it's also cool to see another canadian resident member within sment! my first little ask is as much as I love LE, that girl is jaw-droppingly talented, would it be alright to change into moonbyulyi ( i'm guessing from mamamoo? ), because the concept that HERA is to achieve is versatility and LE has that, but me and sienna believe that she is suited more within mature-like or eccentric concepts rather than cute. sorry if that offended you, i really don't mean to. but her personality yes indeed suits the leader position and from what I'm seeing, bona is a very strong character which is good for hard times. motherly leaders are always my favourites so good job with that! it's so cute to see her parents' love story, what an eccentric background detail! i'm also glad to see that her life had bumps to overcome too because we all know that not everything's perfect. although sienna and i are confused with the background section because you're stating about bona's parents losing contact and gaining it once more only to repeat and then end up together, we understand that but it had stated that bona was born in toronto and it's not stated within the background section but in it's place that she moved to seoul and that she grew up in ulsan, so we feel as though a chunk of her life is missing, we'd like it if you would elaborate more with the background as well as how long she stayed in canada and when she moves, because right now, it seems really confusing, perhaps simplifying it a bit more would be best(?).   
     a trainee exchange is certainly fascinating as well, so I applaud you for that, but could you perhaps add more detail about your time in yg? how was it there and the difference to sm, was bona sad that she was leaving? like that. her talent section seems overall fine, although for solo activities, me and sienna find that it's quite unlikely to be posing for big magazines or brands like vogue and etude house unless you were an idol or a professional model because trainees will be a lower priority when it comes to casting models for shoots, so if you could fix that, that would be great! <3
          her trivia is filled out very good as well so well done and YES STEREK AND STYDIA MY OTP SHIPS WITH STILES, /loving you down. oh wow, and it's good to see different kinds of relationships, friends with benefits? how scandalous winkeu. /shot. it's cool to also have love rivals too, eunjung from t-ara seems very interesting, mind elaborating more on where this pair actually met? that would be good, there is not a problem at all with your style section so excellent with that. and for love interest, I really like how you put a variety for the trivia, it really helps alongside relationship and history too. haha the description of chen resembles him a lot in my opinion and I really like their relationship which is filled out too. but i've noticed that you meant for bona to have ( originally ) yoon sohee's lead within wolf/growl, but the problem is that it would be unlikely because roles like that are usually offered to visuals, actresses or models, it would be fine to make cameos though as students, so if you could fix that, that would be all problems sorted.
      overall thanks for applying with detail and just be sure to be fixing those errors, and you'll be accepted ( sorry if I came across as rude or hurtful in any way, i didn't want to seem like it all ) <3          

01 / 02 / 15 ( update )
thanks for fixing the errors, you're officially accepted now!

papeterie says :
ayo riqah, and thanks for applying! i see another person has applied to be the leader and such, hehe! by the way, your scene requests and suggestions are quite good. loving the humour that goes here and there throughout your app–it was quite entertaining for me to read, i must say!
    the sections on your app seem to be alright however, aubrey and i would suggest to you add a little more detail on certain sections such as the trivia, scandal section, like explaining why and how the scandal was revealed (etc.) besides from that, on your character yuna's friends' section, you mentioned her being friends with bts members–how did your character meet them since they're idols from a different entertainment company; it'd be nice if you included how yuna has met them in big ent? apart from that, i would suggest for you to switch your singing twin since soyu's a lead vocal. referring back to adding more detail, can you also please add more detail on hoya's personality as well as your character's? also, can you please explain how you got into those entertainment companies as a trainee like did yuna audition, was she scouted? please elaborate more on your trainee life like how she switched from company to company? thanks! despite stating that your character's fearless, everyone has a fear even to the extent of fearing to have a fear so, please add at least one on. i suggest putting in an inferiority complex due to despite your character not being really afraid, you mentioned her of being insecure of the way she looks (etc.) another thing that we have to point out is your character's weight–yes, it's very healthy however, in s.korea, their perception of what they find healthy is different, and sm would make her go on a diet to at least 51kg being the maximum for yuna's weight. 
     again, i'd like to say thanks for applying ^^ please fix those errors and your character will be accepted!

p.s sorry if my review sounded quite stern; aubrey and i just want to make sure that your-as well as everyone else's-app is the best that it could be.
 

papeterie says :
hey, april! oh my, you've applied for the sushi; suzy's the 'bae' <3 see what i did there? no? /slapped.
/coughs as i go back to a much more normal-ish composure. anyway, from what i've seen in your app, i don't really see anything wrong with it. i'm lovin' the detail you've put in especially in the trainee life and background section. the love interest section is my favourite–their relationship with one another just gets me all giddy and stuff, hehe ^^ they both have a 'history' and 'chemistry'; i seriously love their relationship as in i fangirled to high heavens (as well as aubrey)–we're shipping them so hard! <3

     however, i do have a slight thing to question, and it's about the 'musical' thing, does alex and xiumin meet before they debut where there are no news of 'hera' having debuted yet? if so, can you alter it slightly, saying that the musical was a hologram musical (which they're filming)? thanks, for a meeting like that's really unusual and rare to happen between a trainee and idol (sunbae). another thing i'd like to mention-which i don't find to be really big-is your character's weight for most likely, sm would make alex's weight much lower. about 50-51kg maximum for her weight would be the most sm would let a female idol be.
        in the app, we would require for your character's personality traits to have three traits each so, can you please add one more of each? nevertheless, i love the app, and appreciate the extra images you've added in (etc.) thanks for applying and good luck! just make sure to clear up those little things up and you're accepted! ;)

(updated!) you're now accepted! thanks for fixing those minor errors!

p.s alex has a good taste especially with winnie the pooh and other stuff, teehee ^^

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